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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to have piano lessons and swimming lessons, so I went there by my bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No I don't. I think cars or trains are more popular than bikes. Many people go to school or company by them.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、詳細がやや不足しており、文のつながりを示す接続語や具体例を加えるとより良くなります。たとえば、いつ頃から乗っていたか、どのくらいの距離を移動していたか、あるいは特に覚えている出来事を一つ挙げると説得力が増します。また、文は短くまとめられていますが、接続語(for example, because, so)を適切に使い、情報の流れを明確にしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding it from about age seven, and I often cycled two kilometres to reach my piano and swimming lessons. Because the routes were quiet, I felt safe and enjoyed the short rides every week.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 意見は明確ですが、理由や具体的な比較が足りません。接続語(however, because, while)を使って対比や理由を示し、具体的な状況や例(天候、都市部と地方の違い、通勤時間など)を添えると説得力が増します。また、語彙を少し広げて表現を豊かにしてください。

Ví dụ: Not really. While some people cycle for short trips, cars and trains are generally more popular because they are faster and more convenient in cities. For example, many commuters take trains during peak hours, and families often prefer cars for shopping and long journeys.

Ngữ pháp

Third person singular issue

× No I don't.

No, I don't think so.

The original response is short and somewhat informal; grammatically it's acceptable but context requires completing the sentence to answer the question about bikes' popularity. Adding 'think so' completes the idea and matches subject 'I' with verb phrase 'do not think'. Also include comma after 'No' for correct punctuation.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think cars or trains are more popular than bikes.

I think cars and trains are more popular than bikes.

Using 'or' suggests only one of the two is more popular, while the intended meaning is that both cars and trains are more popular; 'and' is correct. No pronoun error per se but this falls under incorrect conjunction/pronoun choice affecting meaning; corrected to 'and'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Many people go to school or company by them.

Many people go to school or to work by them.

'Company' is not commonly used to mean 'workplace' in this context; 'go to work' is natural. The pronoun 'them' is ambiguous—use 'by them' could remain but better to say 'by bike' or 'by car or train'. A clearer correction: 'Many people go to school or to work by car or train.' This fixes pronoun ambiguity and word choice.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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