Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับความถูกต้องของไวยากรณ์ และพูดให้กระชับเป็นประโยคที่ชัดเจน เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงคำถาม แล้วให้รายละเอียดรองที่สั้นและมีเหตุผลเชื่อมโยง เช่น อธิบายเหตุผลว่าทำไมถึงไม่มีจักรยาน (พ่อไม่ได้สอน ใช้รถมากกว่า) ใช้คำเชื่อมอย่าง because หรือ so และหลีกเลี่ยงคำแบบเติมเต็มเช่น like, uh ที่มากเกินไป

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My father never taught me how to ride, and my family usually preferred using the car, so we rarely needed bicycles.

Gợi ý: ปรับความชัดเจนและความสมเหตุสมผลของเหตุผลที่ให้ พูดตอบตรงคำถามก่อน แล้วให้เหตุผลที่ชัดเจน เช่น ยกปัจจัยเรื่องการใช้รถยนต์จำนวนมาก ความปลอดภัย และสภาพถนน ใช้ linking words (for example, because, so) และแก้แกรมม่า เช่น subject-verb agreement และคำที่ถูกต้อง (e.g. in Thailand, motorcycles, accidents)

Ví dụ: Not really. In Thailand many people prefer cars and motorcycles to bicycles, so bicycles are less common. For example, busy roads and safety concerns make cycling less popular here.

× I didn't have a bike when I were shy because like I my dad didn't teach me how to ride a bike and uh, my family usually used the car more than the bike in time.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my dad didn't teach me how to ride one, and my family usually used the car more than bicycles at that time.

The sentence contains incorrect past-tense verb form 'were' for the subject 'I' (should be 'was'). The phrase 'when I were shy' is likely intended to mean 'when I was a child'; use an appropriate time phrase. 'Like I my dad' is ungrammatical and should be simplified to 'my dad'. 'How to ride a bike' is fine, but 'one' avoids repetition. 'In time' is incorrect here; use 'at that time'. Suggestions: use correct past tense 'was' with 'I', choose clear time expressions, remove filler words, and avoid repetition by using pronouns like 'one'.

× Don't really because like in Thai, we have a lot of a car.

✓ Not really, because in Thailand we have a lot of cars.

The sentence fragment 'Don't really' lacks a subject and uses a contraction inappropriate for a full response. 'In Thai' should be 'in Thailand' (country name) and 'a lot of a car' is singular; use plural 'cars'. Suggestions: begin with 'Not really' as a short answer, use proper country name, and match plural noun with quantifier 'a lot of'.

× We use the car, uh, more than the bike.

✓ We use cars more than bicycles.

Use plural nouns for general statements: 'cars' and 'bicycles' instead of 'the car' and 'the bike'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestions: state general habits with plural nouns and concise wording.

× And I think if you ride a bike, it's not very safe much as a car because also MO motorcycle.

✓ And I think riding a bike is not as safe as driving a car, and there are also many motorcycle accidents.

The phrase 'not very safe much as a car' is incorrect; use comparative structure 'not as safe as'. 'If you ride a bike' can be changed to gerund 'riding a bike' for general statements. 'Because also MO motorcycle' is unclear; likely intended to mention motorcycles and accidents—rewrite as 'there are also many motorcycle accidents'. Suggestions: use correct comparative 'not as...as', prefer gerund for generalizations, and clarify unclear abbreviations.

× I have a lot of the accident if you ride.

✓ There were many accidents involving motorcycles when people rode them.

Mixes present 'have' with conditional 'if you ride' and uses 'a lot of the accident' incorrectly. For past reference, use past tense 'there were many accidents'. If making a general statement, use 'there are many accidents involving motorcycles'. 'If you ride' is vague; specify 'when people rode them' or 'when you ride'. Suggestions: choose consistent tense, use 'there is/are' or 'there was/were' for existence, and use plural 'accidents'.