Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify tense and pronunciation, correct vocabulary, reduce redundancy, and add coherent supporting details. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid contradictory or unclear phrases like “improve my reactions badly.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small black bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought to help me learn balance. As a result, I became more confident riding on my own within a few months, and it also encouraged me to be more active.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar, use accurate vocabulary (bike, popular, commonly), and add specific reasons with linking words. Start with a clear opinion, then give two concise, specific reasons — for example, convenience and bike-sharing schemes — using connectors like “because” and “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer them for short commutes and they are cheaper than cars. In addition, bike-sharing systems are widespread in cities, which makes cycling convenient for workers and students.

× Yeah, I do have a back when I was a child it was more black with some training wheels and my parents bought it for me because they want to exercise my body and I think it did the trick.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was more black and had some training wheels, and my parents bought it for me because they wanted to help me exercise, and I think it did the trick.

Pronoun and vocabulary errors: 'back' should be 'bike' (wrong word). Tense and pronoun consistency: the student uses present 'do have' with past time 'when I was a child' — use past tense 'did have'. Run-on sentence: original is a run-on; split into two sentences and connect clauses correctly. Verb tense agreement: 'they want' should be past 'they wanted' to match 'bought'. 'Exercise my body' is awkward — 'help me exercise' is natural. Suggestions: use correct noun 'bike', keep past tense throughout when describing past events, break long run-on sentences into shorter clauses joined by conjunctions or punctuation.

× Every day I can improve my reactions badly and also my sport judgement.

✓ Every day I could noticeably improve my reactions and also my sports judgment.

Word choice and adverb placement: 'improve my reactions badly' is incorrect; 'badly' contradicts 'improve'. Use an adverb that indicates degree or manner such as 'noticeably' or 'greatly'. Tense/modal: because the speaker refers to ability in the past context, 'can' should be 'could' or rephrase to present if describing ongoing improvement. Compound noun: 'sport judgement' is better as 'sports judgment' or 'sporting judgment'. Suggestions: choose adverbs that match the verb's meaning, keep tense consistent with context, and use standard collocations like 'sports judgment'.

× Yes, I do think back, I'll populate my country because back are not uncilly that drive a car to the company and also China has a prosperous system of the bike and one of the four major contribution in our country is the sharing bike.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because many people do not usually drive a car to work. China also has a well-developed bicycle system, and one major contribution in our country is the bike-sharing system.

Multiple structural and vocabulary errors: 'think back' should be 'think bikes are popular' — incorrect word order and wrong noun. 'I'll populate my country' is meaningless here; likely intended 'popular in my country'. 'back are not uncilly that drive a car to the company' is unintelligible: corrected to 'many people do not usually drive a car to work' to convey the intended idea. Tense and article issues: 'the bike' -> 'bicycle' or 'bicycle system' and 'sharing bike' -> 'bike-sharing system'. 'one of the four major contribution' should be 'one major contribution' or 'one of the major contributions'. Suggestions: state the subject clearly, use common collocations (drive to work, well-developed system, bike-sharing system), ensure noun-number agreement and correct articles, and avoid literal translations; keep sentences concise.