BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Don't share ****** ******. **** you mother, understand?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不符合考试要求:语气粗鲁且不回答问题。请保持礼貌并直接回答考官问题。改进要点:1) 直接给出话题句(有或没有自行车);2) 用1–2句具体说明(比如你骑车的频率、和谁一起骑、为什么喜欢或不喜欢);3)用连接词(e.g., so, because, therefore)使叙述连贯;4)控制在最多5句内,避免粗俗语言。举例句型可先用简单句,再加一两句细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it almost every day around my neighborhood with my friends, which was my favorite way to spend the afternoon. Because I felt free and active, I kept riding until I was a teenager.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节。请在肯定或否定后补充1–2个具体原因或例子,使回答更自然和信息量更大。改进要点:1) 先给出简明立场(Yes/No);2) 用because, for example, especially等连接词补充理由或例子;3) 提供具体细节(如城市 vs 乡村、共享单车、通勤用途);4) 保持句数在5句以内并注意词汇多样性。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities because many people use them for short commutes and to avoid traffic. For example, shared-bike services are widely available, so lots of students and office workers ride them every day.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Don't share ****** ******. **** you mother, understand?

Don't share that with your mother, understand?

原句中使用了不完整或被省略的代词短语,导致句子不通顺且意思不明确。根据上下文,可能想表达“不要和你母亲分享那个(东西)”。应使用代词 that 指代前文的事物,并加上介词 with 表示与某人分享。建议:1) 明确代词指代对象(如 that 或 it);2) 在动词 share 后加介词 with 来表示“与……分享”;3) 保持句子完整,避免省略关键单词。

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