Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, actually I don't have a bike when I when I was a child, uh, 'cause I don't like ride a bike. I usually walk to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes definitely umm you know in China the bike sharing series is very popular. You can see uh sharing bikes everywhere and it actually so due to the problem that we umm yeah from the.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案需改进时态和语法,减少重复并更自然地表达。可以先直接回答,然后给出简短原因或细节(不超过5句)。注意使用正确的过去时(had/didn't have)和不定式/动名词(ride/riding),避免语填词如“uh”。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I didn't like riding because I found it difficult, so I usually walked to school with my friends. Walking was a good way to get exercise and chat on the way.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 答案要更有条理并补充具体细节。先给出明确观点,然后用连接词(because, for example)说明原因或举例。避免语音停顿和含糊结尾,提供具体事实或影响。控制在不超过5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in China because bike-sharing services have made them convenient and affordable. For example, you can find millions of dockless bikes in cities, which helps reduce traffic congestion and makes short trips easy.
× No, actually I don't have a bike when I when I was a child, uh, 'cause I don't like ride a bike. I usually walk to school.
✓ No. Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, because I didn't like riding a bike. I usually walked to school.
错误类型:现在时使用不当(应使用过去时)和动词+ -ing 形式错误。 解释:句子叙述的是过去的情况,主句和相关动作应使用过去时,因此“don't have”应改为“didn't have”;同理“don't like ride”中“don't like”应为过去时“didn't like”,且动词“ride”在“like”之后需用动名词形式,改为“riding”。最后一句也描述过去的常态,应把“usually walk”改为过去时“usually walked”。 改进建议:当叙述过去发生的事或过去的习惯时,统一使用过去时;在表达“like/love/hate + 动作”时,动作用动名词(-ing)。
× Yes definitely umm you know in China the bike sharing series is very popular. You can see uh sharing bikes everywhere and it actually so due to the problem that we umm yeah from the.
✓ Yes, definitely. You know, in China bike-sharing services are very popular. You can see shared bikes everywhere, and actually, due to some problems, ...
错误类型:时态和词形错误以及名词复数/搭配问题。 解释:原句中“the bike sharing series”用词不当,应为“bike-sharing services”(复数且用连字符或作复合名词);“sharing bikes”可改为“shared bikes”。句中使用现在时描述普遍事实是正确,但原句后半句结构不完整且词序混乱,应补全或重构。"it actually so due to the problem that we..." 是不完整句,需用简单清晰的表达,如“and actually, due to some problems,...”。 改进建议:描述普遍事实可用一般现在时;注意名词搭配(bike-sharing service(s) / shared bikes);避免口语断句和不完整从句,补全原因或重写更清晰的句子。