BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Do you remember anything?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

This is very popular in my computer country.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 18.0

Gợi ý: Your reply does not answer the examiner's question and is off-topic. To improve, give a direct short topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how often you rode, a memory). Keep answers natural, concise (maximum 5 sentences), and use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because my parents lived nearby, I often rode with my friends after lessons, which helped me learn to ride confidently.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and contains incorrect phrasing ('computer country'). To improve, state your opinion directly and support it with specific reasons or examples (urban cycling, commuting, leisure). Use correct collocations such as 'popular in my country' and linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep the response natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, so students and office workers often cycle to work or school.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Do you remember anything?

Do you remember anything about that?

The sentence is grammatically correct but is contextually odd as an answer to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. It lacks a reference to the topic. Adding 'about that' clarifies the pronoun 'that' and connects the reply to the examiner's question, improving coherence and avoiding ambiguous use of the pronoun. Suggestion: include a brief phrase referring to the topic when answering a specific question.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× This is very popular in my computer country.

Bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence uses 'this' and 'computer' incorrectly. 'This' (singular demonstrative) doesn't match the general plural subject 'bikes', and 'computer country' is not a valid adjective-noun combination here. The correction uses the plural noun 'bikes' to refer to the topic and removes the incorrect word 'computer'. Also, use 'in my country' to indicate location. Suggestion: match demonstratives and nouns in number and avoid unrelated adjectives; keep statements about general popularity in plural form when referring to a category.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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