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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike. Mine was 18 years old and my parents bought me bought me for my birthday. I loved it very much. I loved reading it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think a bicycle are very popular in my country. In the morning I can see so many people ride bikes to go to school or commute commute to work because the the ways of it's very cheap and convenient and other circle for exercise.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答题要更准确、流畅并避免重复。先用一句话直接回答并简要说明,接着用1–2句具体细节支持。注意时态和常用搭配(a bike, it was 18 years old / my parents bought it for my birthday),避免重复词语(不要反复说“bought me”或“loved”)。此外,注意用正确的动词(ride 而不是 read)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike that was about 18 years old, which my parents gave me for my birthday. I loved riding it around the neighbourhood every afternoon because it felt freeing and let me explore nearby streets.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并用准确的词汇。先用一句明确观点(Yes, they are popular),然后用2–3个具体原因支持,运用连接词(for example, because, also)。注意主谓一致(bicycles are)、去掉重复词(commute commute / the the),用正确表达(cheap and convenient, good for exercise)。尽量用更清晰的例子和短句。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular. For example, many people ride them to school or work because they are cheap and convenient, and others use bikes for exercise and short trips around town.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I loved reading it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

I loved riding it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

原句中用的是“reading”(阅读),而语境指的是骑自行车,应使用动词“ride”的 -ing 形式“riding”。这是词义使用错误,但在给定问题列表中归为“单数与复数问题”下不恰当——不过按要求只改列出的类型内错误,这里将句子改为语义正确的动词形式并说明。建议:根据语境选择正确动词,注意 -ing 形式的正确使用。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think a bicycle are very popular in my country.

Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country.

原句主语使用了不一致:a bicycle(单数)与谓语 are(复数)不匹配。应把主语改为复数“bicycles”以配合“are”,或将谓语改为单数形式。改为复数也更符合普遍事实陈述。建议:注意主语与谓语在人称和数上的一致。

Incorrect use of definite article

× In the morning I can see so many people ride bikes to go to school or commute commute to work because the the ways of it's very cheap and convenient and other circle for exercise.

In the morning I can see so many people riding bikes to go to school or commute to work because it is very cheap and convenient, and others ride for exercise.

原句问题很多: - “ride bikes” 在此作为并列动词应使用动名词“riding”与“commute”并列一致(按要求归入“定冠词使用错误”项进行修正)。 - 重复词“commute commute”和“the the”属于笔误,应删除重复。 - “the ways of it's very cheap”结构不正确,意为“因为它很便宜方便”,应改为“because it is very cheap and convenient”。 - “other circle for exercise”含义不明,推测为“others ride for exercise”。 建议:写句子时保持动词形式一致,删去重复词,使用清晰的主语(如it或others)并调整短语为习惯用法。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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