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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, umm, bikes are popular in my country because this is the transportation to go every everywhere they want.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (where, how often, who with, or a brief memory). Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I rode around my neighborhood almost every afternoon when I was eight. Because my parents lived near a park, I often cycled there with my friends, which helped me become confident on two wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and specific: start with a clear opinion, then support it with one or two concrete reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar (e.g., 'everywhere' not 'every everywhere'). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to go to the market, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, umm, bikes are popular in my country because this is the transportation to go every everywhere they want.

Yes, umm, bikes are popular in my country because they are the means of transportation people use to go everywhere they want.

The original sentence has incorrect and awkward use of prepositions and determiners: 'this is the transportation to go every everywhere they want' is ungrammatical. 'This' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (use 'they' or 'bikes'). 'the transportation' is unnatural; use 'the means of transportation' or 'a common form of transportation'. 'to go every everywhere' is incorrect — 'everywhere' alone is sufficient and does not take 'every' before it. Also change structure to 'people use to go everywhere they want' to clarify the subject and verb. Suggestion: replace 'this is the transportation to go every everywhere they want' with 'they are the means of transportation people use to go everywhere they want'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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