Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar, make the response more concise and coherent, and add one clear supporting detail. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use a topic sentence, then one or two linked supporting details (reason and brief result).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small yellow bike with training wheels, and I remember it clearly because I never removed the training wheels, so I never learned to ride properly.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more structured: start with a direct opinion, then give two specific supporting details (where and how people use bikes, and the bike-sharing app with a brief effect). Correct minor grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' appropriately.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, my city Chongqing has many dedicated bicycle lanes, so people often cycle for short trips, and there is also a cheap bike‑sharing app called Loco Bike that makes cycling convenient for commuters.

× So I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Using 'did have' is unnecessary emphatic past tense. The simple past 'had' is appropriate and more natural for a factual statement about childhood.

× In fact, there was yellow I, I have a very vivid memory of it.

✓ In fact, it was yellow; I have a very vivid memory of it.

The original sentence has incorrect word order ('there was yellow I') and a comma splice. Replace 'there was yellow I' with 'it was yellow' (correct subject and adjective order) and join clauses properly or use a semicolon to avoid a run-on sentence.

× Ocean had it had two assessed wheels.

✓ It had two assisted wheels.

The original contains multiple incorrect words ('Ocean', duplicate 'had', 'assessed' instead of 'assisted'). Use the correct subject 'it' and adjective 'assisted' to describe the wheels: 'It had two assisted wheels.'

× And then because of those wheels, I never really got to learn how to ride a bike and I never took the assistive wheels off.

✓ Because of those wheels, I never learned to ride a bike and I never took the training wheels off.

Use 'learned to ride' (more natural) instead of 'got to learn how to ride'. 'Assistive wheels' is nonstandard; 'training wheels' is the correct term. Streamline the sentence by removing redundant conjunctions.

× Oh, I think bikes are really popular in my country.

✓ Oh, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The original is grammatically acceptable, but 'very' is more idiomatic than 'really' in this context. No tense change is required.

× So for example in the area I live in Chongqing know it's actually filled with different bicycle tracks so everyone just use bikes to travel around.

✓ For example, in the area where I live in Chongqing, it is actually filled with different bicycle tracks, so everyone just uses bikes to travel around.

Multiple issues: missing relative clause 'where', misplaced 'know' (probably 'now' or extraneous), subject-verb agreement ('everyone uses'), and punctuation to separate clauses. Use 'it is' for clarity and correct verb agreement.

× And actually there's an app called Loco Bike which offers renting service which is very affordable.

✓ And actually there's an app called Loco Bike which offers a bike-rental service that is very affordable.

'Renting service' is awkward; use 'bike-rental service' or 'rental service' and include an article 'a'. Also change the second 'which' to 'that' (optional) to avoid repetition and improve flow.