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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I have a bike when I was 3.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Bikes are not very popular in my country because there aren't many pathways for bikes to travel.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, use past tense and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two short specifics (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a gift from my parents when I was three, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood. It helped me learn balance and made outdoor play very fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details and use a linking word to connect them. Mention examples (e.g., traffic, cultural preferences, or infrastructure) to make your answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Not really — bikes are not very popular in my country because there are few dedicated cycle paths and traffic can be unsafe. As a result, most people prefer cars or motorbikes for commuting, especially in cities where roads are crowded.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I have a bike when I was 3.

I had a bike when I was 3.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was 3'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past events (I had a bike when I was 3).

There be issue

× Bikes are not very popular in my country because there aren't many pathways for bikes to travel.

Bikes are not very popular in my country because there are not many paths for bikes to use.

Using 'there aren't' is grammatically acceptable, but 'pathways for bikes to travel' is wordy and slightly awkward. The main grammatical concern from the provided list is the 'There be' construction; keep consistent negative form 'there are not' or 'there aren't' with plural 'paths'. Also prefer 'paths' or 'bike lanes' and verb 'use' rather than 'travel'. Suggestion: say 'because there are not many bike lanes' or 'because there are not many paths for bikes to use'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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