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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, bikes are not popular in my country. I think it's because but people don't obey traffic rules.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is grammatical and direct, but it's very short and lacks supporting details. To improve, give a brief topic sentence and then add one or two specific reasons or a short anecdote using a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Keep it natural and within 3–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took public transport, and I only learned to ride when I was a teenager.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question but contains an error ('because but') and lacks clear development. To improve, correct the linking word usage and expand with a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words like 'because', 'so', or 'therefore' to make your point coherent, and avoid contradictions in the same clause.

Ví dụ: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because many people don't obey traffic rules. Therefore, cycling can feel unsafe in cities, and most families prefer cars or motorbikes instead.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No, bikes are not popular in my country. I think it's because but people don't obey traffic rules.

No, bikes are not popular in my country. I think it is because people do not obey traffic rules.

The original sentence contains a sentence structure error caused by the unnecessary conjunction 'but' following 'because', creating a fragment and interrupting the causal clause. Remove 'but' to form a correct because-clause: 'I think it is because people do not obey traffic rules.' Also expand the contraction 'it's' to 'it is' if a more formal register is preferred. Ensure subject-verb agreement in the negative present simple by using 'do not obey' rather than the contraction 'don't' if you want to avoid informality.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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