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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, actually when I was a child my mom bought a bike for me and since then I I will study. I was studying how to ride a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. I guess riding a bike is a good way to, umm, feed our body and more and more young people begin to write about.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和连贯,避免语法错误与重复。先用一句话明确回答,然后用一两句提供具体细节(例如几岁开始、学会骑车用了多长时间、在哪里练习)。注意时态一致并减少停顿词(如 umm)。

Ví dụ: Yes. My mother bought me a bike when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood over the summer. It took me about a week of practice with my father holding the seat before I could ride on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更精确的观点和更恰当的词汇。说明原因时要用具体细节(例如健身、环保、交通方便),并用连接词使句子流畅(for example, because, also)。避免词汇错误(如 write 应为 ride 或 cycling)。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Cycling is becoming more popular because it is good exercise and an eco-friendly way to commute. For example, many young people now cycle to university or work, and cities have been adding bike lanes to encourage it.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, actually when I was a child my mom bought a bike for me and since then I I will study. I was studying how to ride a bike.

Yes — actually, when I was a child my mom bought a bike for me, and since then I have been studying how to ride a bike.

错误类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句包含重复单词“I I”和时态混用“since then I will study”不符合逻辑。使用“since then”应与现在完成进行时连用以表示从过去某时开始持续到现在的动作:"have been studying"。建议:删除重复词,使用正确的现在完成进行时,并用逗号或破折号分隔句子使其更清晰。

Incorrect use of verbs / collocation (Verb + -ing form)

× Yes, of course. I guess riding a bike is a good way to, umm, feed our body and more and more young people begin to write about.

Yes, of course. I guess riding a bike is a good way to keep our body fit, and more and more young people are starting to ride bikes.

错误类型:动词搭配/现在分词使用(8、6 并兼及搭配问题)。原句中“feed our body”搭配不当,英语中应使用“keep our body fit”或“keep fit”。此外“begin to write about”明显用词错误,应该是“begin to ride”或“are starting to ride”。时态上描述现在的趋势用一般现在时或现在进行时都可,"are starting to ride" 更自然。建议:使用恰当的动词搭配(keep...fit),并改正动词为表示骑行(ride),根据语境选择现在进行或一般现在时。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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