Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct tense and articles, avoid redundancy, and keep within 3–4 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add when or who with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") and one concrete memory.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I really wanted one. Because my friends had bicycles, I often rode with them around the neighborhood after school. Those afternoons were fun because we raced each other and explored nearby parks.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to present reasons. Avoid awkward phrasing and repeated negatives. Be specific about who rides bikes and for what purposes, and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people, especially those who cannot afford cars or motorbikes, use bikes to commute to work; additionally, cycling is common in small towns because roads are narrow and traffic is lighter.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was child, but I really wanted one.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I really wanted one.

Missing the article 'a' before 'child'. The phrase should be 'when I was a child'. Add 'a' to make the sentence grammatically correct. Suggestion: include necessary articles with singular countable nouns (e.g., 'a child').

× My friends had bicycles so I often ride with them around the neighborhood and enjoy this those afternoons a lot.

✓ My friends had bicycles, so I often rode with them around the neighborhood and enjoyed those afternoons a lot.

Tense inconsistency: the first clause is past tense ('had'), so the following actions should also be in past tense. 'Ride' and 'enjoy' should be 'rode' and 'enjoyed'. Also 'this those afternoons' is incorrect; use 'those afternoons'. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past tense when describing past habitual actions and use the correct demonstrative pronoun 'those' for plural afternoons.

× Yes, I think lots of people from my country ride the bicycle and people who don't do not have much money, who cannot afford the car or motorbike, they usually ride bicycles for work.

✓ Yes, I think lots of people in my country ride bicycles, and people who do not have much money, who cannot afford a car or motorbike, usually ride bicycles for work.

Article errors: do not use 'the' before general plural noun 'bicycles'; use 'bicycles' or 'ride bicycles'. Also 'from my country' is better phrased as 'in my country'. Remove the redundant 'do' in 'don't do not'. Use 'do not have' or 'don't have'. Use 'a car' instead of 'the car' when speaking generally. Finally, avoid repeating subjects: remove the extra 'they' after the relative clause. Suggestion: use plural nouns without 'the' for general statements, choose 'in my country', and keep clauses concise and non-redundant.