Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. My bike is blue. It's very beautiful and I always ride the ride it to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, the bike in my country is very popular because people always ride it to go walk or go to school. It's very convenient and not always to wait the subway or the taxi.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 句子時態與語法錯誤較多,造成表達不自然。回答過於重複(例如“ride the ride it”),句子應更簡潔並使用正確的過去式。可以先用主題句直接回答,然後用一到兩句具體細節支持(如誰送的、多久用一次、對你的影響)。注意最多保持五句以內。
Ví dụ: Yes. I had a blue bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I rode it to school almost every day. I loved it because it felt very fast and made me feel independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 表達基本清晰但語法與詞彙使用不夠自然(例如“go walk”、“not always to wait”)。回答可更具體,提供原因和例子,並使用連接詞使語流更順暢。保持簡潔且使用合適的詞彙描述普及原因(如環保、經濟、交通便利)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap, convenient and good for the environment. For example, students often cycle to school and commuters use bikes to avoid traffic jams.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
原句中使用了现在时态“have”,但句子时间状语是“when I was a child”(过去),应使用一般过去时。建议根据时间状语选择时态:表示过去的经历或状态用过去式(had)。
× My bike is blue.
✓ My bike was blue.
在上下文中学生在谈论过去拥有的自行车,前后句均为过去时(was),因此“is”应改为过去式“was”以保持时态一致。
× It's very beautiful and I always ride the ride it to school.
✓ It was very beautiful and I always rode it to school.
原句存在两处问题:一是时态不一致(使用现在时“is/ride”而上下文为过去),二是重复短语“ride the ride it”混乱,应删去重复。将动词改为过去式“was/rode”,并使用正确的代词“it”。建议检查代词和动词是否多余或重复,并保持时态一致。
× Yes, the bike in my country is very popular because people always ride it to go walk or go to school.
✓ Yes, bikes in my country are very popular because people always ride them to go to work or to school.
原句中单复数不匹配:谈及普遍现象应使用复数“bikes”且谓语用复数形式“are”。另外“ride it”指代不明,改为复数代词“them”。“go walk”不自然,应改为“go to work”或“go for a walk”根据语境选择,此处改为“go to work”更通顺。建议主语为泛指时用复数,代词保持一致。
× It's very convenient and not always to wait the subway or the taxi.
✓ It's very convenient and you don't always have to wait for the subway or a taxi.
原句时态与结构不当:“not always to wait the subway or the taxi”语序和用法错误。应使用情态结构“don't have to”表示“不必经常等待”,并在动词后加介词“for”以及使用不定冠词或无冠词的名词短语。建议学习情态动词和固定搭配(wait for)。