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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when we are? Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Do you think puppy do you think bike are popular in your country?

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答重复并且有语法错误,显得不自然且没有直接回答问题。建议先用一个明确的主题句直接回答(例如“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”),随后给出一两句简短具体的补充说明。注意时态和人称(使用“when I was a child”而不是“we are”),并控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon and practised riding without training wheels until I felt confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答是重复并且包含无关词(如“puppy”),而且没有直接给出意见。建议首先直接表达观点(例如“Yes, they are”或“No, not really”),然後用1–2句具体原因或例子支持观点,使用连词如“because”或“because of”。注意主谓一致("bikes are")并保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you often see bike-sharing programs and dedicated bike lanes that make cycling convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you have a bike when we are? Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

原句中“Did you have a bike when we are?” 结构混乱且时态不一致。提问是关于过去是否有自行车,应使用过去时的疑问句“Did you have...”并用过去时间状语“when you were a child”。建议:删除错误的片段“when we are”,保留正确的句子“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”。注意保持主语一致并使用与时间相符的时态(过去时)。

Sentence structure errors

× Do you think puppy do you think bike are popular in your country?

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

原句包含多余和重复的词语(“puppy do you think bike”),导致句子结构混乱。正确的表达应为简单疑问句:‘Do you think bikes are popular in your country?’ 注意名词单复数一致(使用复数’s’表示一般性或普遍性),并去掉无关词‘puppy’和重复的短语。建议:简化句子,保留主干‘Do you think + 主语 + 谓语 + 补语’,确保主语与谓语一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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