Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Personally I think bikes are very popular in my country because it's very environment. It's a very environment friendly way to get out rather than just by car which is very expensive. Then people just need to waste a lot of money.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短。应该提供一句主题句后补充具体细节或原因,以显示语言丰富性和连贯性。建议在一句话中说明原因或补充回忆(如家庭情况、交通选择、年龄等),并用简单连词如“because”或“so”扩展到2–3句。注意保持自然表达,长度不超过5句。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents preferred me to use public transport. As a result, I often walked to school with my friends, which helped me learn the route and make friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答案有观点但表达不准确且有语法错误和重复。需要用更恰当的词汇(environmentally friendly / environment-friendly),改进句子结构,避免重复和口语性填充词。建议用一到两句先给出直接观点,然后用一到两句具体支持理由(如成本、便捷、交通拥堵),并使用连接词如“because”或“also”。保持总句数不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Many people prefer cycling to avoid traffic jams and save money on petrol and parking.
× Personally I think bikes are very popular in my country because it's very environment.
✓ Personally, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are very environmentally friendly.
句子中使用了名词性形容词“environment”错误地当作形容词或副词来修饰。应使用形容词或副词短语“environmentally friendly”来表示“对环境友好”。同时主语“bikes”为复数,谓语及指代词应一致,使用“they are”。建议:把“environment”替换为“environmentally friendly”,并确保主谓一致。
× It's a very environment friendly way to get out rather than just by car which is very expensive.
✓ It's a very environmentally friendly way to get around rather than going by car, which is very expensive.
“environment friendly”应为副词+形容词结构“environmentally friendly”。此外,短语“get out”用法不当,表达“出行/出门”应使用“get around”或“get around town”。比较结构中更自然的对比是使用动名词短语“going by car”。建议将“environment friendly”改为“environmentally friendly”,并用“get around”和“going by car”。
× Then people just need to waste a lot of money.
✓ Otherwise, people would have to spend a lot of money.
原句“need to waste a lot of money”在含义和语法上不自然:动词“waste”侧重“浪费”,而在对比中更合适使用“spend”(花费)。此外,上下文是对比事实或可能性,用“would have to”或“have to”更符合语气。建议把“need to waste a lot of money”改为“would have to spend a lot of money”以使表达更自然、语法正确。