Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think so. Almost every family has a back and we use bikes to go out to meet friends or just commute to the company.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,且重复了考官的话。回答时要先给出直接的主题句(有或没有),然后补充具体细节或例子来丰富内容。保证不超过五句话,使用连词(如 because, so, when)使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle until I was ten, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon because we played in the park nearby.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较简短且有语法和拼写错误(back→bike),细节不够具体。建议先给出明确的主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持(例如谁骑、在什么场合、为什么受欢迎),使用连词如 because 或 for example。注意发音与词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them to commute short distances because they are cheap and convenient, and families often teach children to ride from a young age.
× Yeah, I think so. Almost every family has a back and we use bikes to go out to meet friends or just commute to the company.
✓ Yeah, I think so. Almost every family has a bike, and we use bikes to go out to meet friends or just commute to the company.
错误类型(简体中文):句子结构/词语使用不当(对应列表中的“Sentence structure errors”,ID 26)。 解释:原句中“has a back”是拼写或用词错误,正确应为“has a bike”(有一辆自行车)。此外在两个并列分句之间需要用逗号并加连词“and”以保持句子连贯。建议改正拼写并确保并列句用适当标点和连词。 改进建议:1) 注意常见单词的拼写,特别是“bike”。2) 在并列句之间使用逗号+连词(或分号)保持句子通顺。3) 多读、听以巩固常用词汇的拼写和用法。