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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety. They thought the streets near my near our home were too busy, so they didn't want me riding on the road.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

It is very popular in my country. Many people, especially students and office workers, ride bikes for short trips and commuting because they are cheap, convenient and good for the environment.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且相关,但存在重复(“near my near our home”)和句子稍长,可更自然并用连词使语言更流畅。建议修正重复错误,使用一至两句话表达原因,并加一个简短的细节(例如父母如何替代骑车的出行方式)。注意发音和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. My parents were worried about my safety because the roads near our home were very busy, so they didn't allow me to ride on the street. Instead, I usually walked or took the bus to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰且贴切,但第一句主谓不一致(应为“they are”或“bicycles are”)。可以增加具体细节或比较来丰富答案,例如提到共享单车或城市骑行道。使用连接词使句子更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people, especially students and office workers, use them for short trips or commuting because they're cheap, convenient and environmentally friendly. Recently, the rise of bike‑sharing programs and better bike lanes has made cycling even more common.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety.

该句本身语法正确,无需改动。意思清楚,时态与上下文一致。建议注意语流,可在口语中保持自然语速。

Sentence structure errors

× They thought the streets near my near our home were too busy, so they didn't want me riding on the road.

They thought the streets near our home were too busy, so they didn't want me to ride on the road.

原句中出现了重复的词组“near my near our home”,属于句子结构与用词重复问题,应删除多余部分。另一个问题是动词形式:在“didn't want me ...”后面接不定式“to ride”更符合习惯用法,而“me riding”虽然也可理解,但在表达愿望或希望时更常用不定式。改正后时态和意思与上下文一致。建议:注意不要重复短语,并在“want sb ...”表愿望时优先使用“want sb to do sth”的结构。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× It is very popular in my country.

They are very popular in my country.

原句中主语指代前一句中的“bikes”,为复数,故谓语应使用复数形式“are”。使用“It is”会产生指代不明或主谓不一致的问题。建议在谈论复数名词(如bikes)时,主语和谓语保持复数一致,例如“Bikes are very popular”或使用复数代词“They are very popular”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Many people, especially students and office workers, ride bikes for short trips and commuting because they are cheap, convenient and good for the environment.

Many people, especially students and office workers, ride bikes for short trips and commuting because bikes are cheap, convenient and good for the environment.

原句中“they”指代不够明确,虽然通常可理解为“bikes”,但在正式表达中最好直接重复名词以避免歧义。将“they”改为“bikes”更清晰,且与句子主旨保持一致。建议在句子中若代词可能引起歧义,应直接使用名词来明确指代。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
ShortConcise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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