Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't because I was born in a mountain city. There there were not that much people who can ride a bike, so I don't have the conditions in no matter. Conditions or financial conditions?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Oh, Oh yeah, it depends the land form because I was born in one city, so we don't have that nature, but in the platforms.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够直接且有语法错误,时态使用不当,信息混乱。建议: 1) 使用正确时态(过去时)直接回答问题并给出简短原因; 2) 句子简洁明了,不超过5句; 3) 使用连词(because, so, therefore)让信息连贯; 4) 提供具体细节,如地形(山地)、交通不便或家庭经济状况。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I grew up in a mountainous city. The steep, narrow roads made cycling difficult, and there were few places suitable for riding. Also, my family couldn’t afford a bike at the time, so I mainly walked to school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且句子结构不完整,表达不够清晰。建议: 1) 直接回答问题(Yes/No/It depends),然后用1–2句解释; 2) 使用准确词汇(terrain, flat areas, cities, countryside)替代不明确的词语; 3) 提供具体比较(例如:在平地城市自行车广泛使用,而山区或拥挤城市则少用); 4) 注意连贯性,用because, however等连接句子。
Ví dụ: It depends. Bikes are very popular in flat urban areas and among students because they are cheap and convenient. However, in mountainous regions or very busy cities, people tend to use cars or public transport instead because cycling is less practical.
× No, I don't because I was born in a mountain city.
✓ No, I didn't, because I was born in a mountain city.
原句用現在時態的否定("I don't")與後面的過去時間點("I was born")不一致。回答過去是否擁有某物時應使用過去時,因此把 "I don't" 改為過去式的否定 "I didn't"。建議:遇到描述過去情況時,整句動詞時態要一致。
× There there were not that much people who can ride a bike, so I don't have the conditions in no matter.
✓ There were not that many people who could ride a bike, so I didn't have the conditions.
原句有多處錯誤:"that much people" 應為可數名詞用 "many" 而非 "much";動詞時態與能力描述需用過去式 "could";雙重否定與結構混亂("so I don't have the conditions in no matter")應改為過去的肯定或否定陳述,改為 "so I didn't have the conditions"。建議:可數名詞用 many,描述過去能力用 could,避免使用不必要或錯誤的雙重否定及片語。
× Conditions or financial conditions?
✓ Do you mean general conditions or financial conditions?
原句為片語形式,缺少句子結構和主語,讓人難以理解。詢問澄清時需使用完整的疑問句,如 "Do you mean..."。建議:提出選擇性澄清時使用完整句式以保持禮貌和清晰。
× Oh, Oh yeah, it depends the land form because I was born in one city, so we don't have that nature, but in the platforms.
✓ Oh, yeah, it depends on the landform. Because I was born in a mountainous city, we didn't have that kind of natural environment, but in the plains they do.
原句有時態與介詞錯誤:"depends the land form" 應用 "depends on";"land form" 常寫為 "landform" 或可用 "mountainous/flat area";前半涉及現在一般事實可用現在時,但句中混合過去出生情況應保持一致,描述過去時用 "we didn't have";"platforms" 用詞不當,應為 "plains"(平原)。建議:注意介詞搭配(depends on),區分地形詞彙,並保持時態一致。