Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and unclear phrases (e.g. “money to marker”). Use correct names for components and simple past tense consistently.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a Giant frame with good suspension and an XTS groupset. Because I rode on rough trails near my home, the shocks helped a lot and made my rides more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Remove redundancy and filler words. Mention who invested in bikes and give a short example or result to make it concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes have become more popular in my province, especially after the COVID pandemic. Many people started cycling for exercise and commuting, so bike shops and cycling clubs grew in number as a result.

× Yes, I had a bike uh my bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, my own bike.

The original sentence is understandable but awkward and lacks punctuation; use past tense 'had' (which is correct) and add a clarifying phrase 'my own bike' to make it natural and grammatical. Add a comma to separate clauses.

× My bike brand was the bike brand frame was giant and uh.

✓ The brand of my bike was Giant, and its frame was Giant as well.

The original sentence repeats phrases and lacks clear structure. Reorder to 'The brand of my bike was Giant' and use a conjunction to connect the clause about the frame. Capitalize proper noun 'Giant'. This fixes sentence fragmentation and improves clarity.

× I had good specs in it, such as the shocks.

✓ It had good specifications, such as quality shocks.

'Specs' is informal; use 'specifications'. 'Good specs in it' is awkward—rephrase to 'It had good specifications'. Adding an adjective 'quality' clarifies 'shocks'. This corrects word choice and adjective usage.

× The shocks were money to marker uh.

✓ The shocks were high-quality and from a well-known brand.

Original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect words ('money to marker'). Replace with a clear adjective phrase 'high-quality' and specify 'from a well-known brand' if intended. This corrects wrong word usage and clarifies meaning.

× The group set were uh XTS.

✓ The groupset was an XTS.

'Groupset' (one unit) is singular, so use singular verb 'was'. Also use article 'an' before vowel sound 'XTS' and combine 'group set' into 'groupset' (commonly used) for clarity.

× A bike is bikes are bikes when popular in my country are in my province.

✓ Bikes are popular in my province.

The original is garbled and repetitive. Simplify to a clear subject-verb structure: 'Bikes are popular in my province.' This removes redundancy and fixes sentence structure.

× During after the COVID pandemic, uh bikes were popular and many many invested in bikes.

✓ During and after the COVID pandemic, bikes became popular, and many people invested in them.

Combine time expressions correctly: 'During and after the COVID pandemic' or choose one. Use past tense 'became' to indicate change. 'Many many invested in bikes' is ungrammatical—use 'many people invested in them' and replace repeated word with a clearer noun. This corrects tense usage and pronoun reference.