Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Remove repetitions and use past tense consistently. Also include a brief specific detail (e.g., how you used the bike or a memory) to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes. My father bought me a bicycle when I was six, and I rode it every afternoon around my neighborhood. I remember learning to balance with his help, and it became my main way to visit friends and play outside.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use natural phrasing (e.g., “I think” or “In my country”) and provide concrete examples of why bikes are popular (transport, exercise, affordability). Correct grammar and expand slightly but keep within 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting and exercise. For example, students and workers often cycle to save money on transport, and others ride regularly to stay fit. Moreover, bike-sharing programs in cities have made cycling more convenient and widespread.

× When I when I was a child then my father bought me a gift a bike.

✓ When I was a child my father bought me a bike.

Redundant words and word order: 'When I when I was a child' repeats 'when I'. Also 'a gift a bike' is redundant; choose one phrase. The sentence refers to a past event so simple past 'bought' is correct. Suggestion: remove repetition and use the natural word order 'When I was a child, my father bought me a bike.'

× So I have a bike when I am child.

✓ So I had a bike when I was a child.

Tense and article/pronoun errors: The sentence refers to the past, so use simple past 'had' and 'was' rather than present 'have'/'am'. Also 'a child' needs the article and correct verb 'was'. Suggestion: match tense across the sentence and use 'a child' with 'was'.

× According to me, bikes are very popular in my country because it helps health and the weight loss.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because they help with health and weight loss.

Pronoun and verb agreement and phrasing: 'According to me' is unnatural; 'In my opinion' is preferred. 'Bikes' is plural so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'help' instead of 'it helps'. Also 'helps health and the weight loss' is awkward: use 'help with health and weight loss' or 'promote health and help with weight loss.' Suggestion: use plural agreement and clearer collocations like 'help with' and 'weight loss' without 'the'.