BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I have a bike in my childhood and the help of which I ride in my village town.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, there are many boys which are popular in my country, such as Honda 125.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural, and include a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use past tense for childhood, avoid awkward phrases like "the help of which," and give a brief specific detail (where or how you used it). Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I used it to ride around my village every day. It was very useful for visiting friends and going to the market, and I learned to ride it when I was about seven.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 36.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Explain what type of bikes are popular and why, using linking words to add one specific reason or example. Avoid confusing phrasing like "many boys which are popular" and name types correctly (motorbikes, models). Keep to one to three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride models like the Honda 125 because they are affordable and fuel-efficient for daily travel, especially in crowded cities.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yeah, I have a bike in my childhood and the help of which I ride in my village town.

Yeah, I had a bike in my childhood, and with its help I rode around my village town.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'have' with the past time phrase 'in my childhood'; use past tense 'had'. Also 'the help of which' is an awkward relative construction; use 'with its help' and change 'ride' to past 'rode' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent with time adverbials (use past for past time) and use natural prepositional/relative phrasing (e.g., 'with its help', 'rode around'). Grammar problem type ID:6

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, there are many boys which are popular in my country, such as Honda 125.

Yeah, many bikes are popular in my country, such as the Honda 125.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'boys' instead of 'bikes' and uses 'which' to refer to people/things awkwardly. Also 'are popular' is fine but the subject should be 'bikes'. Replace 'boys' with 'bikes' and use the article with the model name 'the Honda 125'. Use 'which' only for clauses; here it's unnecessary. Suggestion: choose correct noun and use articles appropriately (e.g., 'the Honda 125'). Grammar problem type ID:12

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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