Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), remove hesitations, and make the answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say you received it as a gift, describe a distinctive feature briefly, and mention a memory or how you used it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my birthday, and I used it almost every day to ride around the neighbourhood. In particular, it had a small remote-controlled light, which made it feel special and fun to ride in the evenings.

Gợi ý: Use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'popular' not 'proper', 'numerous' usage), avoid hesitations, and give one clear reason with a specific example. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with a reason and a short example using a linking word like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people rent a bike to run quick errands or commute to nearby markets, especially in crowded city areas.

× Yes, I have bike when I was a child, it was gifted by my mother on my birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; it was gifted to me by my mother on my birthday.

Tense consistency: the event is in the past so 'have' should be 'had' (present tense issue). Also missing article 'a' before 'bike' is an article error but per instructions only correct types in the list; this correction fixes both tense and article because article errors are listed (22) but primary issue is present tense. Use 'gifted to me' (correct verb pattern with indirect object). Keep past tense throughout for consistency.

× Uh, it works with remote uh, like the bike that was you can we can usually found that many kids have.

✓ Uh, it worked with a remote, like the kind of bike you can usually find that many kids have.

The student mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms. 'Works' should match past context 'worked' (present participle issue relates to using correct -ing form or participle; here correcting to past simple). 'Found' was incorrectly used instead of 'find' for general present truth; restructuring to 'you can usually find' fixes verb form. Added article 'a' and rephrased for clarity.

× Yes, I think bikes are proper in my country uh, because there are numerous of bikes we usually seen on roads.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are numerous bikes we usually see on the roads.

'Are proper' is incorrect word choice and collocational error; intended meaning is 'popular'. 'We usually seen' is wrong tense: 'seen' is past participle; use present 'see' for habitual action (present tense issue). Remove 'of' after 'numerous' (quantifier usage). Added definite article 'the' before 'roads' for natural phrasing.

× Whenever people have any small work, they usually go on a rent on bike.

✓ Whenever people have a small errand, they usually rent a bike or take a bike on rent.

'Have any small work' is awkward; use 'have a small errand' or 'have a small job'. 'Go on a rent on bike' uses incorrect prepositions and collocation: correct expressions are 'rent a bike' or 'take a bike on rent'. This fixes preposition and collocation errors by using standard verb 'rent' and proper article use.