Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In my city there are many bike sharing services. Many people use shared bikes to get around, and I'd often ride a shared bike to studios because it is cheap and convenient for short distance.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有真正回答考官的问题,只是重复了问题。这会被视为不完整的回应。建议直接给出主题句(肯定或否定),然后补充一到两句具体细节(例如你是否有车、自行车的类型、你如何使用它或与家人的回忆),使用连接词使表达连贯。保持总句数不超过5句,语言自然简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to a nearby park almost every afternoon. Because the neighborhood was quiet and safe, I became quite confident cycling on my own.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 总体回答直接且内容相关,但可以改进细节的丰富性和连接词的使用。建议在首句给出明确总体判断,随后用连接词(例如“for example”或“because”)提供具体数据或场景(如共享单车普及率、骑行的典型路线、优缺点),并加入一两句个人体验或比较来增强说服力。保持句子简洁,避免重复表达相同意思。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, my city has dozens of bike-sharing stations, so many commuters use bikes for short trips. I often take a shared bike to my studio since it saves time and is cheaper than taking a taxi.
× Did you have a bike when you were a child?
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
句子本身是考官的提问,考生在回答时应使用简单过去时。原稿中考生重复了考官的问题而没有给出答案。建议:用过去式(had)直接回答,例如“I had a bike when I was a child.” 表示在过去某一时期拥有某物。
× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In my city there are many bike sharing services. Many people use shared bikes to get around, and I'd often ride a shared bike to studios because it is cheap and convenient for short distance.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In my city there are many bike-sharing services. Many people use shared bikes to get around, and I often rode a shared bike to studios because they were cheap and convenient for short distances.
该段存在时态和词形错误:1) 回答开头关于普遍事实用现在时“are...are...use”是正确的,但后半句讲过去习惯应用过去时而非“I'd often”(“I'd”通常缩写为“I would”或“I had”,在此引起模糊)。因此应使用过去时“I often rode”或“I would often ride”。2) “bike sharing services”建议写成复合形“bike-sharing services”。3) “it is cheap”中指代复数“shared bikes”,应使用复数代词“they were”且与叙述过去保持一致。4) “for short distance”为不可数表达需用复数或带冠词“for short distances”或“for a short distance”。建议:把描述过去习惯的动词改为过去式,代词和数一致,并修正固定搭配。