Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with connectors. Correct common errors (tense, word choice) and avoid filler words (umm).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I received my first bicycle as a gift from my parents when I was a child. At first I found it difficult to learn to ride, but after a few weeks of practice I became confident and enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, correct sentence structure and vocabulary, use linking words to add a specific reason or example, and avoid repetition and fillers. Mention concrete facts (e.g., scooters are common, students and commuters use them) to support your view.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes and scooters are very popular in Vietnam. Most people rely on motorbikes for daily travel because they are inexpensive and convenient in traffic. For example, many students and office workers commute by scooter since parking is easy and fuel costs are lower than owning a car.

× When it was a chime, I definitely have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I definitely had a bike.

The sentence mixes incorrect words and tenses: 'chime' is a wrong word for 'child' and 'have' is present tense while the time marker 'When I was a child' requires past tense. Use 'had' for past possession and correct the word to 'child'. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' + past tense verb for events in the past.

× Umm, it's really hard to start learn how to drive and ride a bike at first, but after that I think it's getting easier because it's my first gift from my parents, so I'm really excited about it.

✓ Umm, it was really hard to start learning how to drive and ride a bike at first, but after that I think it got easier because it was my first gift from my parents, so I was really excited about it.

Multiple tense and verb form issues: the speaker refers to a past experience, so past tense should be used consistently ('was' instead of 'it's', 'start learning' uses gerund after 'start', so 'start learn' is incorrect). 'Getting' should be past ('got') to match timeline. 'It's my first gift' should be past ('it was') and emotional reaction 'I'm really excited' should be past ('I was really excited'). Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when describing past experiences and use the gerund (-ing) after 'start'.

× I also use it is pretty popular umm because my my orange orange country is Vietnam.

✓ I also think it is pretty popular because my country is Vietnam.

The original has incorrect and repeated words and a wrong verb 'use' where 'think' or 'believe' is intended. 'My my orange orange' is repetition and 'orange' is irrelevant. Replace with 'my country is Vietnam' and use 'think' to express opinion. Suggestion: avoid accidental repetitions and choose verbs that match intended meaning.

× So most of umm the main vehicle he call is umm bike or scooters umm some people may have cars but not a lot.

✓ So most of the main vehicles people use are bikes or scooters; some people may have cars but not many.

Problems include wrong pronoun 'he', incorrect singular/plural forms and word order. 'The main vehicle he call' is ungrammatical—should be 'the main vehicles people use' or 'are'. Use plural 'vehicles' and plural verbs 'are'. 'Not a lot' is informal; 'not many' fits count nouns. Suggestion: use clear subject ('people') and match plural nouns and verbs.

× So it's definitely very popular especially for student.

✓ So it's definitely very popular especially for students.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because the meaning refers to students in general. Use plural to match 'especially for' when indicating a group. Suggestion: use plural for general groups (students, people, drivers).