Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Use a linking word if you add details. Also correct grammar: avoid repeating phrases and use simple past correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I rode it almost every day after school.

Gợi ý: Good content and coherence. Improve by replacing casual "yeah" with "yes" in a formal test, using a clear topic sentence, and adding a specific reason or brief comparison with a linking word to enrich the answer. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many primary school students ride them after school, and they often cycle with friends because it is inexpensive and healthy. In contrast, adults usually prefer public transport for longer commutes.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence repeats the phrase 'when I was' causing redundancy and disrupts fluency. Remove the repeated phrase to produce a grammatically correct past-time statement. Also, 'did have' is acceptable for emphasis in past simple, but 'I had a bike when I was a child' is more natural; either is correct. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was a child' for simplicity.

× You can see many primary school students ride their bikes after school.

✓ You can see many primary school students riding their bikes after school.

After verbs of perception like 'see', when describing an action in progress, use the -ing form (present participle) of the verb: 'see students riding' rather than the bare infinitive 'ride', which would imply seeing the complete action. Use 'riding' to indicate the ongoing activity.

× They are very happy to ride bicycles with their friends.

✓ They are very happy riding bicycles with their friends.

Using 'happy to ride' is not strictly incorrect, but 'happy riding' more naturally expresses that riding bicycles is an activity that makes them happy. Changing to the -ing form matches the ongoing action and improves naturalness. If emphasizing willingness rather than the activity, 'happy to ride' would be acceptable; here context prefers 'happy riding'.