Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct vocabulary (bike, ride) and simple, correct grammar. Keep responses to a maximum of 3–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the idea coherent. Correct tenses: use simple past for childhood events. Avoid repetition and unclear fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but it was too big for me so I found it hard to ride. Because it didn’t fit, I often used a smaller scooter instead. I remember practicing in front of my house until I felt more confident.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with specific reasons and clear vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes/No) then give 2–3 concrete reasons (rental services, convenience, cost, traffic). Use linking words (for example, also, because) and correct nouns (bike-share or rental stations, parking). Avoid unclear words and fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, there are many bike-share stations in city centres, so people can rent a bike for short trips. Also, bikes are easy to park and cheaper than taxis, which makes them a convenient choice for daily commuting.

× Yes, I had a bag when I was a kid, but my bike was very big for me so actually it's not it was not fit.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid, but my bike was very big for me so actually it did not fit.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect verbs. The context is past (when I was a kid), so use past simple consistently: 'did not fit' is the correct past negative of 'fit'. Also 'it's not it was not fit' is ungrammatical; remove the present 'it's' and use 'did not fit'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use 'did not fit' for past negative.

× So I I read back last when was a kid.

✓ So I rode it back when I was a kid.

The sentence has repetition, incorrect verb choice ('read' instead of 'rode') and missing subject in the subordinate clause. The correct verb for using a bike is 'ride' with past form 'rode'. Also include the subject 'I' in 'when I was a kid'. Suggestion: say 'So I rode it back when I was a kid.' to be clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, actually bike.

✓ Yes, actually bikes are popular.

The fragment 'actually bike' is incomplete and singular; the question asks about bikes in general so use the plural 'bikes'. Form a complete sentence: 'Bikes are popular.' Suggestion: use plural when speaking about general trends and provide a full sentence.

× You can rent some deer places and also is very easy to park back to find up easy to find a place to.

✓ You can rent them in some places and it is also very easy to park; it's easy to find a place to park.

The original has multiple preposition and word-order errors: 'rent some deer places' is incorrect (likely 'rent them in some places'), 'park back to find up' is jumbled. Correct prepositions: 'rent them in some places' and 'find a place to park'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement 'it is'. Suggestion: restructure the sentence into clear clauses: 'You can rent them in some places, and it's very easy to find a place to park.'