Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Устраните повторы и паузы, начните с прямого ответа, затем кратко объясните причину и добавьте один связанный факт. Работайте над связностью: используйте связки (for example, however, because) и правильные времена (past vs present). Попробуйте сократить ответ до 2–4 предложений без долгих заполнителей (umm, uh).

Ví dụ: I didn't have a bike as a child, although I always wanted one because it was my childhood dream. I still haven't bought a bike because I now live in a flat with limited storage space.

Gợi ý: Дайте чёткий общий ответ, затем добавьте конкретную причину и пример. Избегайте повторов и заполнителей, используйте связующие слова (because, for example, therefore) корректно и объясняйте, что такое «special cards». Постарайтесь быть более точным в словах и структуре.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many cities require a seasonal permit or card to use public bike-sharing systems, which encourages regular usage during the summer.

× I was umm, uh, and I always and I have always wanted to have a bike.

✓ I was, um, and I have always wanted to have a bike.

The sentence has redundant fillers and repeated conjunctions which break sentence flow and clarity. Remove duplicate 'and' and use consistent tense: 'I have always wanted' expresses an ongoing desire from past to present. Suggest avoiding filler words like 'umm' in formal answers and keeping one auxiliary 'have' for present perfect. Problem type ID:26

× Unfortunately I haven't bought any and uh, it is my how to say it is my childhood dream.

✓ Unfortunately I haven't bought one, and it is, how should I say, my childhood dream.

Use 'one' for a single countable noun instead of 'any' when referring back to 'a bike'. The phrase 'how to say it' is awkward; 'how should I say' is a correct interrogative insert. Commas improve readability. Present perfect 'haven't bought' is correct for an action not done up to now. Problem type ID:6

× Now I live in a flat and there is no any, There is no.

✓ Now I live in a flat and there isn't any space, there is none.

'No any' is ungrammatical; use 'any' with negatives ('there isn't any') or 'no' without 'any' ('there is no space'). Specify the noun ('space' or 'room') for clarity. Use consistent negative form and capitalization. Problem type ID:14

× As As for me, yeah, it's, they are very popular and uh, you can use them, uh, in uh, streets if you want, uh, therefore you have to buy special cards for, for the season, for the summer season.

✓ As for me, they are very popular. You can use them on the streets if you want; however, you have to buy special cards for the summer season.

Remove repeated words and fillers ('As As', multiple 'uh') and split the run-on into two sentences for clarity. Use the preposition 'on the streets' instead of 'in streets'. 'Therefore' is formal and better replaced by 'however' or 'but' depending on meaning; here 'however' contrasts popularity with the requirement to buy seasonal cards. Avoid repeating 'for the season' and 'for the summer season'—use one clear phrase. Problem type ID:26