Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bag when I was a child. It was bought, bought by my father and I was really happy about that. I'm so exciting that I can ride to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not exactly, currently I think ebike is more popular because it can can give me a lot of time to go more distant.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 首先,回答要直接且准确地回应问题(这里是“bike”而不是“bag”)。句子要用正确时态和形式,避免重复和语法错误。可以先用一句主题句说明有无自行车,然后用一到两句具体细节支持(谁买的、什么时候、带来的感受或用途),并使用连接词使表达连贯。例如注意动词过去式、形容词用法,以及情感描述的正确形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school every day. I felt very proud and excited because it gave me more freedom to travel around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并提供具体原因和对比。先直接回答是否流行,然后用一两句说明原因并给出具体例子或比较(比如与传统自行车相比的优势)。注意避免重复单词(如“can can”),使用正确的主谓一致和量词,并用连接词如“because”或“however”使结构清楚。
Ví dụ: Not really. In my country electric bikes are more popular than traditional bicycles because they are faster and easier for commuting longer distances. For example, many people use e-bikes to travel from suburbs to the city for work, which saves time and reduces physical effort.
× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
原句中学生回答应与考官提问一致。考官问“Did you have a bike...”,学生却写成“bag”(名词错误并非列在清单,但需改为与问题一致以保持语义)。此处为词汇选择错误,建议注意听题并用正确词汇作答。
× It was bought, bought by my father and I was really happy about that.
✓ It was bought by my father, and I was really happy about it.
句中重复使用“bought”是冗余。用被动语态“was bought by my father”已完整表达“被我父亲买”。随后连接词后应使用代词“it”指代之前的名词而不是重复动词。建议去掉多余词、用正确代词,并在并列句中添加逗号连接。
× I'm so exciting that I can ride to school.
✓ I was so excited that I could ride to school.
“exciting”是现在分词/形容词,表示“使人兴奋的”,而说话者要表达自己的感受应使用“excited”。另外,句子描述过去的情形,应使用过去时“was”和“could”。建议区分形容词的主动/被动含义并保持时态一致。
× Not exactly, currently I think ebike is more popular because it can can give me a lot of time to go more distant.
✓ Not exactly. Currently I think e-bikes are more popular because they can save me a lot of time when going longer distances.
原句存在多处问题:1) 主语“ebike”应为复数“e-bikes”(名词复数问题);2) 重复写了“can can”;3) “give me a lot of time to go more distant”表达不自然且语法错误,应改为“save me a lot of time when going longer distances”;4) 时态和主谓一致需用现在时“are”和“can”。建议注意主谓一致、避免重复词、使用自然固定搭配(save time, longer distances)。