Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler phrases (e.g. “you know”, “as you know”) and correct basic grammar (plural/singular and verb forms). Use linking words like “when” or “because” to connect ideas. Keep it to 3–4 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I learned to ride when I was four and my father taught me how to balance on the bike. I remember practicing in the park every weekend, which made cycling feel fun and easy from an early age.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes/No) and give two specific reasons with linking words such as “because” and “therefore.” Avoid hesitations and false starts. Use precise phrases like “in recent years” or “infrastructure” instead of vague expressions.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think cycling is as popular now as it used to be. This is mainly because the government has not built enough bike lanes, and as a result many people feel cycling is unsafe in cities. Therefore fewer people choose bikes for daily travel.

× Yep, as you know that every child has a bike and I think that riding a bicycle is very enjoyable.

✓ Yes, as you know, every child has a bike, and I think that riding a bicycle is very enjoyable.

Replace informal 'Yep' with 'Yes' for formality and remove unnecessary 'that' after 'as you know'. Also add commas to separate clauses. The main issue is pronoun/connector misuse: 'as you know that' is incorrect; use 'as you know' followed by the clause without 'that'.

× I started cycling this bike when I was four years old and my father taught me how to ride a bike because you know that when we are child we don't have a balance.

✓ I started riding this bike when I was four years old, and my father taught me how to ride a bike because, as you know, when we are children we don't have much balance.

'Started cycling this bike' is awkward; use 'started riding this bike'. 'When we are child' has incorrect noun form; use plural 'children'. Also add 'much' to quantify 'balance'. The grammar problems include incorrect verb phrase choice and incorrect use of singular/plural for 'child'.

× So he touted me that.

✓ So he taught me that.

The student used 'touted' (wrong verb) instead of 'taught' (past tense of 'teach'). This is a lexical/verb error. Use 'taught' to indicate past instruction.

× I think that it's not popular as the past because, you know, in Turkey, the people, sorry, the government's not uh, building bicycle roads.

✓ I think that it is not as popular as in the past because, you know, in Turkey the government is not building bicycle lanes.

Compare 'not popular as the past' is incorrect; use 'not as popular as in the past'. 'The people, sorry, the government's' is a confusion between subjects; choose 'the government'. Use 'is not building' (present progressive) to describe ongoing lack of construction. Also 'bicycle roads' is better as 'bicycle lanes'.

× So, uh, by the time passes, people uh, are concerning about, uh, cycling, riding the bikes.

✓ So, as time passes, people become less concerned about cycling and riding bikes.

'By the time passes' is incorrect; use 'as time passes'. 'Are concerning about' is wrong; use 'become concerned about' or 'are concerned about'. Also streamline 'cycling, riding the bikes' to 'cycling and riding bikes'. This involves incorrect preposition and verb usage.

× So I don't think now it's popular.

✓ So I don't think it is popular now.

Word order is awkward; place 'now' at end or 'it is' in correct order: 'I don't think it is popular now.' This corrects present-tense statement word order for clarity.