Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, because, uh, my family is very poor when I trial.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think buys are proper in my country because in in spare time people really like bye bye uh for health.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 在回答中要直接回应问题并用正确时态;减少口头填充词(如 uh);改正语法和词汇错误,并给出简短具体的补充说明。可以先用一句话回答,再用一两句解释原因或补充细节,整段不超过5句。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. My family couldn't afford a bike when I was a child, so I usually walked to school or took public transport.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要用流利、准确的词汇并避免重复;用连词把观点和理由连接起来;提供更具体的细节或例子(比如在哪些地方更流行、哪类人更常骑车)。保持句子简洁且不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns, because many people cycle for exercise and to avoid traffic during rush hour.
× No, because, uh, my family is very poor when I trial.
✓ No, because my family was very poor when I was a child.
原句时态和用词不当。“when I trial”不是正确表达童年时间的说法,应使用“when I was a child”或“when I was young”。另外主句描述过去的情况应使用过去时,因此“is very poor”要改为“was very poor”。建议:遇到表示过去某一段时间的情况时,主句与时间状语要统一使用过去时;用“was/wasn’t”来描述过去的状态。
× Yes, I think buys are proper in my country because in in spare time people really like bye bye uh for health.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in their spare time people really like to ride them for their health.
原句有多个问题:1) “buys”拼写错误,应为“bikes”;2) “are proper”用词不当,表达“受欢迎”应为“are popular”;3) “in in spare time”重复且不自然,应为“in their spare time”;4) “people really like bye bye uh”是口误,正确结构是“people really like to ride them”;5) 缺少代词指代单车,使用“them”更清晰;6) 为了表示目的,使用“for their health”更自然。句子时态为一般现在时,描述习惯性动作,故使用一般现在时(think / are / like / ride)。建议:注意常用名词拼写(bike),选择合适形容词(popular而非proper),避免口语填充词,使用恰当代词指代之前提到的事物,并保持时态一致。