Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
When I was a child, I didn't have a bike things I'm not good at riding a bike and I just preferred to stay home and do some paintings.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think so. You could see a lot of shared bikes on the street and people believes riding a bike can maintain their healthy level. So people prefer to ride a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且句子更简洁,避免语法错误与冗余。最好先用一句话直接回答问题,然后用一两句补充具体原因或细节,使用连接词使表述连贯。例如纠正时态和从句结构,把“things I'm not good at riding a bike”改为“I wasn't good at riding a bike”。建议句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wasn't good at riding, so my parents didn't buy one for me. Instead, I preferred staying at home and doing paintings, which I enjoyed a lot.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答总体可以理解,但需注意语法(主谓一致、时态)和表达更具体。用更自然的衔接词(e.g. because, therefore)并给出具体例子或比较会更有说服力。避免笼统短句,把“people believes”改为“people believe”,把“maintain their healthy level”改为“stay healthy”或“maintain their health”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. You can see many shared bikes on the streets, especially in cities, because cycling is a cheap and convenient way to travel. Many people also prefer cycling to keep fit and to avoid traffic jams.
× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike things I'm not good at riding a bike and I just preferred to stay home and do some paintings.
✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike. I'm not good at riding a bike, and I just preferred to stay home and do some paintings.
问题类型:26(句子结构错误)。原句由多个分句连在一起,缺少必要的标点和衔接词,导致句子混乱。应将句子拆分为独立句或用逗号和连词正确连接;同时时态应一致(先描述过去:didn't have a bike、preferred 使用过去时;关于能力的描述可用一般现在时或过去时,根据意图选择)。建议:1)在“bike”后加句号,使前后句独立;2)在“I'm not good at riding a bike”和“and I just preferred...”之间加逗号和连词“and”;3)如果想全部使用过去背景,可把“I'm not good at”改为“I wasn't good at”。
× You could see a lot of shared bikes on the street and people believes riding a bike can maintain their healthy level.
✓ You can see a lot of shared bikes on the street, and people believe riding a bike can maintain their health.
问题类型:12(代词/主谓一致相关使用问题亦归类此处)。原句中“people believes”主语是复数“people”,谓语动词不应加 -s,应为“believe”;“their healthy level”表达不自然,应改为“their health”或“a healthy level”,这里用“their health”更简洁正确。建议:1)将“believes”改为“believe”;2)把“their healthy level”改为“their health”;3)保证时态与事实陈述一致(此处用一般现在时)。