Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid incorrect or confusing details, and limit to 2–3 short sentences. Correct factual errors (e.g., Kunming is in China, not Seoul) and avoid unclear phrases like “going to reach Jason.” Add one specific detail about your course or year.

Ví dụ: I'm a student. I'm a senior majoring in classical music composition at Kunming University in China. I'm excited because I'm finishing my final projects this year and preparing for postgraduate applications.

Gợi ý: Structure the response with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words for coherence (for example, because, so) and correct small grammar issues (use singular/plural and articles correctly). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually study in the university library. I go there with friends at least once a week because it is very quiet and helps me concentrate on composing and theory work.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and support it with relevant, coherent reasons. Avoid irrelevant or confusing details (e.g., ‘big TV’ and ‘cushion’ are odd unless explained). Use correct grammar and linking words to make the explanation logical. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a very good place to study because it is quiet and has comfortable seating that helps me focus. The library also has separate study zones, so I can choose a calm area when I need concentration.

Gợi ý: Provide a complete, clear response: state whether you want changes, then give one specific, realistic suggestion with a reason. Avoid trailing off and be grammatically correct. Use linking words like however or although properly.

Ví dụ: Not really, because the library already has good facilities. If I could change one thing, I would add more private practice rooms for music students so we can rehearse without disturbing others.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about your plan and add one or two specific reasons or details. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘master's degree’, ‘the UK has a strong music industry’) and avoid vague phrases. Explain what you want to study more deeply or which aspect of the music industry you aim to specialise in.

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a master's degree in the UK because it has a strong music industry and excellent postgraduate programs. I hope to specialise in composition for film and media so I can develop professional skills and network with industry professionals.

× I'm majoring in classical music composition at Kunming University, which is located in Seoul.

✓ I'm majoring in classical music composition at Kunming University, which is located in Kunming.

The preposition and place are inconsistent: Kunming University is in Kunming, not Seoul. Use the correct place name after 'located in'. Ensure proper noun accuracy and appropriate preposition 'located in' before the city name.

× Also, I'm a senior, so I'm going to reach Jason.

✓ Also, I'm a senior, so I'm going to graduate in June.

The phrase 'going to reach Jason' is ungrammatical and unclear in this context. Likely intended meaning is to indicate finishing studies; use 'graduate' with appropriate time expression. Maintain sentence structure subject + auxiliary + verb.

× I feel a little bit excited.

✓ I feel a little excited.

'A little bit' is informal and redundant with 'a little'; use 'a little excited' for natural adverbial modification of the adjective 'excited'. Alternatively 'a bit excited' is acceptable.

× I usually go to my university libraries to study with my friends at least once a week because it is really quiet space which helps me concentrate better on my subject.

✓ I usually go to the university library to study with my friends at least once a week because it is a really quiet space that helps me concentrate better on my studies.

Use definite article 'the' for a specific location and singular 'library' if referring to one main library. 'A really quiet space' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Use 'that' (or 'which') to introduce the relative clause, and plural 'studies' is more natural. Also ensure consistent singular/plural and article usage.

× That is because my library has a lot of cushion in it, so it is really snug.

✓ That is because my library has a lot of cushions in it, so it is really snug.

Use plural 'cushions' (countable noun) after 'a lot of'. Maintain noun number agreement.

× Also it has got a big TV hanging on the wall which is why.

✓ Also, it has a big TV hanging on the wall, which is one reason why it's comfortable.

Original sentence ends with 'which is why' without completing the idea. Rephrase to link the TV to the conclusion: 'which is one reason why it's comfortable.' Use 'it has' instead of colloquial 'has got'. Include comma before the relative clause.

× It can be concentrated.

✓ I can concentrate there.

'It can be concentrated' is incorrect: 'concentrate' is an intransitive verb requiring the subject who concentrates. Use 'I can concentrate there' to show who benefits and where.

× Not really. That is because my library already is equipped to, well, facilities.

✓ Not really. That is because my library is already well equipped with facilities.

Incorrect word order and preposition. Use 'well equipped with' + noun. Remove the extraneous 'to' and reorder adjectives: 'well equipped' before 'with facilities'.

× However, if I have a chance, I would like to make a.

✓ However, if I had the chance, I would like to make a few improvements.

Incomplete sentence 'make a' lacks object and uses mismatched conditional tense. Use 'if I had the chance' (second conditional) and provide a clear object 'a few improvements'.

× I want to go to masters degrees in the UK because it has shoes music industry.

✓ I want to pursue a master's degree in the UK because it has a strong music industry.

'Masters degrees' needs article and singular/plural agreement: 'a master's degree' or 'master's degrees'. 'Shoes music industry' is nonsensical; likely 'strong music industry'. Also add article 'a' before 'strong music industry'.

× Also I want to become an expert in music industry and I hope to study my major more deeply.

✓ Also, I want to become an expert in the music industry, and I hope to study my major more deeply.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'music industry'. Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and'. Rest of sentence is acceptable.