Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先给出直接且简短的主题句，避免过多停顿（如“umm”）和冗余描述。补充细节时用连接词使逻辑更清晰，并具体说明专业或课程的特点以增强内容。控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: I'm a student majoring in Digital Media Arts. My university is in Shanghai, a modern and vibrant city. I particularly enjoy courses in interactive design and animation because they combine creativity with technical skills. These classes involve practical projects and teamwork, which help me build a strong portfolio.

Gợi ý: 开头用主题句直接回答，再用一两个具体例子支持观点。避免泛泛而谈（如“many chances”），改为具体场所或展览名称更有说服力。使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”。

Ví dụ: I study in Shanghai, a modern and culturally rich city. For example, I often visit the Power Station of Art and the Shanghai Museum, where I can see both contemporary art and historical artifacts. These visits inspire my projects and help me learn about different artistic styles.

Gợi ý: 注意语法和句子结构，先明确回答（Yes/No + 理由），然后用具体细节支持。修正主谓一致和连接词（例如“not only... but also...”）。尽量用两到三句表达完整观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to study because the campus is peaceful and supportive. Not only are the teachers friendly, but the university also has a large library with many professional books and quiet study areas. This environment makes it easy to concentrate on my coursework.

Gợi ý: 答案应先直接回应并具体说明要改变的方面，避免词汇错误（“refractories”应为“cafeterias”或“canteens”）。提供具体例子和建议（如价格、菜单、座位），并用连接词（because, so, for example）组织句子。补全句子，避免不完整表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the campus canteens to improve. The food is often expensive and not very tasty, so I hope they can offer more affordable and healthier options. For example, they could add more vegetable and student-friendly meal sets and expand seating to reduce overcrowding at lunchtime.

Gợi ý: 先给出清晰的计划句（where and when），然后用一两句说明目的或原因。注意语法（应为『go to Britain』『postgraduate studies』或『a postgraduate degree』），避免重复和冗长。用连接词如『then』『after that』『so that』。

Ví dụ: Next year I plan to go to Britain to pursue a postgraduate degree in media design. After completing my studies, I intend to return to my country and look for a stable job in the creative industry so I can apply the skills I learned abroad.

× Definitely, my university is not only have a beautiful grass and friendly teachers and students we but we also have a big library.

✓ Definitely, my university not only has beautiful lawns and friendly teachers and students, but we also have a big library.

原句中代词和句子结构混乱：使用了 "is not only have"（混合了 be 动词和实义动词）并且出现多余的代词 "we"。应使用主语 + 谓语的一致结构，且将 "grass" 改为更自然的复数名词 "lawns"（草坪）。建议注意主语与谓语的一致，避免多余代词。

× Umm, I'm a student right now and my major is Digital Media art.

✓ Umm, I'm a student right now and my major is Digital Media Art.

原句中主要问题是专有名词大小写需要规范（不是严格的语法类别清单内但属词形问题），此处主谓一致无误。但按清单优先考虑主谓一致：保持主语“my major”与系动词“is”一致。建议专有名词每个实词首字母大写并保持一致写法。

× My university is located in Shanghai which is a beautiful and modern city.

✓ My university is located in Shanghai, which is a beautiful and modern city.

原句缺少逗号导致定语从句与主句连接不清晰。尽管不是严格的介词错误，但属于介词/连接符使用范围内的标点与从句连接问题。建议在城市名之后加逗号引出非限制性定语从句。

× On top of that umm you can find many interesting subject and lessons in there so.

✓ On top of that, you can find many interesting subjects and lessons there.

“many” 后应接可数名词复数形式，原句中 "subject" 应改为复数 "subjects"；同时去掉多余介词 "in"（在此处直接用 "there" 更自然）。建议复数可数名词与复数量词匹配，并注意多余词汇。

× You can find many museums and galleries in there, so there are many chances to watch the excellent paintings or advanced technologies.

✓ You can find many museums and galleries there, so there are many opportunities to see excellent paintings and advanced technologies.

原句结构冗余且用词不自然："in there" 多余；"chances to watch" 用法不当，应为 "opportunities to see"；并且连接词 "so" 后句子需要完整主谓结构。建议简化表达并使用更自然的搭配。

× I study in Shanghai, which is a modern and beautiful city. You can find many museums and galleries in there, so there are many chances to watch the excellent paintings or advanced technologies.

✓ I study in Shanghai, which is a modern and beautiful city. You can find many museums and galleries there, so there are many opportunities to see excellent paintings and advanced technologies.

原句中出现 "the excellent paintings"，使用了不必要的定冠词 "the"。在泛指时应去掉定冠词。建议理解何时使用定冠词（特指）与泛指的区别。

× On top of that, I think we need a big space because during the lunch time many students.

✓ On top of that, I think we need a bigger space because during lunchtime many students gather/crowd together.

原句句尾不完整，缺少动词，且比较级 "bigger" 更合适表示需要更大的空间。原句也把 "lunch time" 写得不自然，改为复合词 "lunchtime"。建议补全谓语并使用比较级以表达比较关系。

× You can find many professional books in there and they provide a peaceful atmosphere.

✓ You can find many professional books there, and they provide a peaceful atmosphere.

主要问题是介词与副词搭配，去掉 "in" 更自然。时态 "provide" 与主语 "books" 一致，但语义上书籍不能提供氛围，改写可接受为原句结构保留。建议注意介词搭配并检查主语能否逻辑上承担谓语动作。

× I will go abroad to British in the next year and to finish my post graduation and then after my post graduation graduate I will find a stable job in my country.

✓ I will go abroad to Britain next year to finish my postgraduate studies, and after I graduate I will find a stable job in my country.

原句中多处问题："go abroad to British" 错用形容词，应为国家名 "Britain"；"in the next year" 常用短语为 "next year"；"to finish my post graduation" 用法不当，应为 "to finish my postgraduate studies" 或 "to complete my postgraduate degree"；"after my post graduation graduate" 结构重复且混乱，改为 "after I graduate"。建议注意国家名称用法、时间表达以及不定式与名词短语搭配。

× Yes, I think the refractories need to change because our refractories have expensive prices and their food are not delicious.

✓ Yes, I think the cafeterias need to change because our cafeterias are expensive and their food is not delicious.

原句使用 "refractories"（不常用且可能误译）应改为常用名词 "cafeterias" 或 "canteens"；"have expensive prices" 不自然，改为动词短语 "are expensive"；此外，"food" 为不可数名词，应使用单数动词 "is" 而非 "are"。建议使用正确名词并注意不可数名词与动词的一致。

× Umm, I'm a student right now and my major is Digital Media art. My university is located in Shanghai which is a beautiful and modern city. On top of that umm you can find many interesting subject and lessons in there so.

✓ Umm, I'm a student right now and my major is Digital Media Art. My university is located in Shanghai, which is a beautiful and modern city. On top of that, you can find many interesting subjects and lessons there.

原句中插入词 "umm"、"so" 放置位置影响流畅性；"umm" 可以放在句首并后接逗号，"so" 在句尾显得多余。建议将填充词放置在句首或适当位置并使用标点以提高流畅度。