Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答总体信息完整但表达有语法和词汇使用问题，要注意时态和冠词，并精简冗余。建议把句子分成两部分：一句表明当前身份/最近状态，第二句说明即将计划。使用简单清晰的句子并注意固定搭配（a bachelor’s degree, postgraduate program, specialize in）。

Ví dụ: I recently graduated with a bachelor’s degree in Pharmacy from the University of Sydney. I am about to start a postgraduate program at the University of Hong Kong, where I will specialize in pharmaceutical medicine.

Gợi ý: 回答内容有信息，但表达不够明确且包含填充词和错误用法（near house, equate with, measure）。建议去掉犹豫词，用准确表达地点和课程优势，并用连接词组织句子。尽量具体说明所在学院和学习内容。

Ví dụ: I studied at the Faculty of Medicine, where I majored in Pharmacy. I enjoyed it because the course teaches practical skills and clinical knowledge that help protect public health.

Gợi ý: 回答肯定但结构松散，重复且含犹豫词。建议先给出直接回答，再用一到两句用连接词详细说明理由，用具体例子支持观点，避免重复。注意单复数和首字母大小写（academic staff）。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The university has a supportive atmosphere for motivated students, with helpful academic staff and creative classmates who often collaborate on projects.

Gợi ý: 回答含混且有很多语法和词汇错误（no necessary, homework stuff project, final seasons, That's the man）。建议直接回答是否需要改变，然后具体说明希望减少哪类评估并给出理由，使用连接词使逻辑清楚。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't ask for major changes, but I would like fewer assessments such as frequent homework and projects because they make the workload hectic, especially during final exams.

Gợi ý: 重复且有发音填充词和措辞错误（previously previously, Hong University of Hong Kong, pharmaceutical medicines, passionate and exciting about to dig）。建议简洁重述计划，使用正确词组并加一两句说明目的或期望，避免不必要重复。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I will start a postgraduate program at the University of Hong Kong in pharmaceutical medicine. I hope to deepen my knowledge of drug development and eventually work in clinical research.

× Yeah, so I recently graduated with a bachelor degree in pharmacy from University of Sydney and I'm about to start my post graduate programs at the University of Hong Kong specializing in the pharmaceutical medicines.

✓ Yeah, so I recently graduated with a bachelor's degree in Pharmacy from the University of Sydney and I'm about to start my postgraduate programme at the University of Hong Kong specializing in pharmaceutical medicines.

错误类型：冠词与词形使用。解释： 1) “bachelor degree” 应为“bachelor's degree”，学位名称需使用所有格形式。2) “University of Sydney” 前需加定冠词 the（The University of Sydney）或直接使用全名时首字母大写并加 the，会更自然；此处我改为“the University of Sydney”。3) “post graduate programs” 应为“postgraduate programme(s)”：合成词“postgraduate”连写，且“programme/program”根据英式拼写我用了 programme；如果是复数可用 programmes，但语境中通常为单一课程可用 programme。4) “the pharmaceutical medicines” 中“the”多余且“pharmaceutical medicines” 本身即可。建议：注意学位与机构名称的固定搭配（bachelor's degree, the University of X），合成形容词连写（postgraduate），避免在不可数或泛指名词前滥用定冠词。

× Well, I started at the Faculty of Medicine near house, uh, majoring in pharmacy, which I think is the most amazing, uh, major in the whole world.

✓ Well, I started at the Faculty of Medicine near my house, majoring in Pharmacy, which I think is the most amazing major in the whole world.

错误类型：介词与所有格使用不当。解释： 1) “near house” 应为“near my house”或“near my home”，需要所有格来明确所属关系。2) 多余填充词去掉并规范大写（学科名通常首字母大写可选）。建议：使用正确的所有格短语（my/our/their）来修饰名词；说话时避免重复的语气词，保持句子清晰。

× Umm, because we would train and equate with necessary skill to ensure the health of the general public.

✓ Umm, because we are trained and equipped with the necessary skills to ensure the health of the general public.

错误类型：动词形式和短语搭配错误（Verb + -ing / 被动与过去分词）。解释： 1) 原句“we would train and equate with necessary skill” 中“would train” 用法不当，且“equate” 词不符合语境，应为“be equipped”。2) 正确表达为被动结构“are trained and equipped”或“were trained and equipped”；同时“skill” 应为复数“skills”，并在“necessary” 前加定冠词“the”。建议：根据语境使用被动语态（are trained）和正确搭配词（be equipped with），注意名词单复数。

× The university has overall a really good atmosphere for passionate learners like me and academic Staffs and professors are really helpful and supportive and student students there are really, really creative and, uh, helpful so that we can.

✓ The university overall has a really good atmosphere for passionate learners like me, and academic staff and professors are really helpful and supportive. Students there are really creative and helpful.

错误类型：主谓一致与冗余词汇。解释： 1) “academic Staffs” 中“staff” 是集合名词，一般不加复数 s，应为“academic staff”。2) “student students” 重复，应为“Students”。3) 原句过长且缺少连贯句尾，需断句并使动词与主语一致（Students are）。建议：避免重复词，注意集合名词用法（staff 不加 s），将长句拆分成短句以确保主谓一致和清晰表达。

× Well, not necessary, no necessary like major changes, but I do hope that we could have less assessments like homework stuff project, because we were pretty busy doing like the final seasons.

✓ Well, not necessarily major changes, but I do hope that we could have fewer assessments like homework and projects, because we were pretty busy doing the final sessions.

错误类型：冠词与数量词使用不当、词形错误。解释： 1) “not necessary, no necessary” 应为副词“not necessarily”。2) “less assessments” 用法错误，countable 名词应使用“fewer”而非“less”。3) “homework stuff project” 词序混乱，应为“homework and projects”。4) “final seasons” 应为“final sessions” 或“finals”（期末考试/学期结尾活动），根据语境改为“final sessions” 或 “finals”。建议：区分可数与不可数名词使用 fewer/less，使用正确副词形式（necessarily），并使用恰当的名词复数形式与连词。

× Well, as I previously, previously mentioned, I'm about to umm, start my postgraduate programs at Hong University of Hong Kong and I'll be majoring in pharmaceutical medicines, which I'm so passionate and exciting about to dig more into the world of medicine and hopefully to UMM.

✓ Well, as I previously mentioned, I'm about to start my postgraduate programme at the University of Hong Kong and I'll be majoring in pharmaceutical sciences, which I'm so passionate and excited about as I want to dig more into the world of medicine.

错误类型：时态与词形搭配不当、词序和机构名称错误。解释： 1) 删除重复词“previously, previously”。2) 机构名应为“the University of Hong Kong” 或“University of Hong Kong”，不能是“Hong University of Hong Kong”。3) “postgraduate programs” 同前应为“postgraduate programme”。4) “pharmaceutical medicines” 用词不自然，通常说“pharmaceutical sciences” 或“pharmacy”。5) “I'm so passionate and exciting about” 中“exciting” 用法错误，应为形容自身感受的形容词“excited”。6) 句尾“and hopefully to UMM” 不完整并且含义不明，应删去或补充完整（未给出具体意图则删去）。建议：注意机构名称固定搭配，选择合适的学科名称，使用正确形容词（excited），并保持句子完整和时态一致。