Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct small grammar mistakes. Start with a direct topic sentence and avoid unnecessary words like 'actually'. Use correct verb tense and article use: say 'I'm a third-year student at Huizhou University, majoring in English Education.'

Ví dụ: I'm a third-year student at Huizhou University, majoring in English Education. I chose this major because I enjoy teaching and literature.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, correct grammar and word choice, and keep it concise. Replace informal fillers ('Just like I said before') and fix agreement: 'which has a wonderful campus' and 'lives up to my expectations.' Add one brief supporting detail with a linking word.

Ví dụ: I study at Huizhou University, which has a wonderful campus and lives up to my expectations because it has modern facilities and a friendly atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using correct vocabulary. Use linking words ('for example', 'also') and correct plural forms ('platforms', 'communication skills'). Avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is. For example, the faculty are very professional, and there are many platforms for students to develop skills, such as communication skills and personal development programs.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct statement about desired changes, correct grammar (word order, modal verbs) and use linking words. Be specific about the problem and the solution. For instance: 'One change I would suggest is installing an elevator in the teaching building because...'.

Ví dụ: Yes, one change I would suggest is installing an elevator in the teaching building, because students often must climb five or six flights to reach classrooms, which is tiring and inconvenient.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, organized response: state the main plan first, then give supporting details. Remove hesitations and fix grammar: 'I plan to pass the IELTS and apply to the University of Hong Kong.' Add one specific step or timeline.

Ví dụ: My plan is to pass the IELTS and then apply to the University of Hong Kong. To prepare, I will study for six months and take a practice test every two weeks to track my progress.

× Actually, I'm a junior student in university.

✓ Actually, I'm a junior student at a university.

Use the article and preposition correctly: say 'a university' (indefinite article) and 'at a university' or 'at university' depending on variety. 'In university' is unidiomatic for this context; 'at a university' is clearer for location.

× I majored in English teaching in the Huizhou University.

✓ I am majoring in English Teaching at Huizhou University.

The student is currently studying, so present continuous or simple present with 'major in' is correct. 'Majored' implies finished study. Also drop the definite article before 'Huizhou University' and use 'at' for the institution.

× Just like I said before, I study in Huizhou University which is wonderful campus and I think this university is live up my expectation.

✓ Just like I said before, I study at Huizhou University, which has a wonderful campus, and I think this university lives up to my expectations.

Use 'at' for studying at an institution. Add commas and change 'which is wonderful campus' to 'which has a wonderful campus' for grammatical noun phrase. 'Live up to' requires the particle 'to' and the verb must agree with singular 'university' (lives). 'Expectation' should be plural as 'expectations' in this context.

× Is it a good place to study?

✓ Is it a good place to study?

This sentence is correct; no article error. Included for completeness.

× I think because the faculty there is very professional and there are many platform for students to improve themselves like communicate abilities or or personal abilities and also.

✓ I think the faculty there is very professional, and there are many platforms for students to improve themselves, such as communication skills and personal abilities.

Use plural 'platforms' with 'many'. 'Communicate abilities' is incorrect; use 'communication skills'. Clean up extra 'or' and trailing 'and also'. Use commas and 'such as' to introduce examples.

× To be honest, I think it is actually have many places should improve.

✓ To be honest, I think there are actually many areas that should be improved.

Original mixes structures and word order is wrong. Use 'there are' for existence and 'areas' or 'places' as plural. Use passive or infinitive with 'should be improved' for clarity.

× For example, the teaching building, we usually must to climb 5 or 6 floors to have a lesson, so I think it is necessary for it to update equip a elevator.

✓ For example, in the teaching building we usually have to climb five or six flights of stairs to get to a lesson, so I think it is necessary to install an elevator.

Do not use 'must to'; use 'have to' or 'must'. Use 'climb five or six flights of stairs' or 'floors' but 'floors' with 'climb' is less natural. 'Update equip a elevator' is ungrammatical; use 'install an elevator' and use the article 'an' before vowel sound. Also remove unnecessary commas and fix word order.

× Well, my future study plans may must be passed the exam like IELTS and I, I would like, I'd like to prefer the I would I'd like to prepare my application for Hong Kong for the University of Hong Kong.

✓ Well, my future study plans include passing exams like the IELTS, and I would like to prepare my application to the University of Hong Kong.

Multiple issues: 'may must be passed' is ungrammatical — use 'include passing' or 'I plan to pass'. Use 'the IELTS' with definite article and 'prepare my application to the University of Hong Kong' is correct preposition. Remove repetitions and unnecessary modal stacking.