Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 簡潔で明確な導入になっていますが、語彙や流暢さをもう少し改善し、文法的に自然な表現にしましょう。例えば “specializing in agricultural science” は良いですが、前置詞や冠詞の使い方（a fourth-year student, I specialize in… / I am specializing in… の選択）を整えるとより自然です。発音とリズムも意識して短く流れるように話す練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: I'm a fourth-year university student in Japan. I specialize in agricultural science, focusing on crop production.

Gợi ý: 情報はあるが語順と冠詞の誤り、そしてつなぎが不自然です。'at the Faculty of Agricultural Science' や 'in Ibrahim Prefecture' のように前置詞と冠詞を修正してください。また “Especially I research on crops such as paprika.” は、つなぎ言葉を使い流れを良くし、動詞の使い方を 'I research crops such as paprika' や 'I mainly research crops such as paprika' に直すと自然です。具体的な研究内容（何を測定しているか、目的）を一文添えるとさらに高得点です。

Ví dụ: I study at the Faculty of Agricultural Science at my university in Ibrahim Prefecture. I mainly research crops such as paprika, focusing on yield improvement and pest resistance.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味もやや不明瞭です。'quite good price to study' は不適切で 'a great place to study' が自然です。'greenhouse which is made of grass' はおそらく 'glass'（ガラス製）や 'greenhouse covered with plastic' の間違いかもしれません。具体的な理由（設備、指導教員、設備の規模や利用法）を述べ、接続詞で理由をつなぎましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to study and conduct research because my university has a large glass greenhouse, which allows us to grow crops year-round and run controlled experiments.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わるが、文法と表現の流れが不自然です。否定の返答の後に理由を述べる場合は 'No, I wouldn't like it to change because…' のように一文でつなげると自然です。'to make any changes' の位置も修正しましょう。さらに静かな環境がどう研究に役立つか具体例を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want it to change because my laboratory is very quiet, and that peaceful environment helps me concentrate when I'm conducting experiments and writing reports.

Gợi ý: 情報は含まれているが文法、語順、不要な繰り返しが目立ちます。'writing my final report to graduate from my bachelor's program' や 'I'd like to do a master's program at Wageningen University'（地名・大学名の正確性を確認）など自然な表現に直してください。また、なぜその大学や分野を選ぶのか、研究したいテーマを一文で加えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: I'm currently writing my final report to complete my bachelor's degree. In the future, I'd like to pursue a master's degree at Wageningen University because of its strong research in crop science, where I hope to study sustainable cultivation methods.

× 'I'm a fourth year university student in Japan and I'm specializing in agricultural science.'

✓ 'I'm a fourth-year university student in Japan, and I'm specializing in agricultural science.'

'Hyphenate compound adjective "fourth-year" and add a comma before conjunction joining two independent clauses. Use hyphen for clarity and comma for correct sentence coordination.'

× 'I study at Faculty of Agriculture Science at my university in Ibrahim Prefecture.'

✓ 'I study at the Faculty of Agricultural Science at my university in Ibaraki Prefecture.'

'Use the definite article "the" with named faculty, use the adjective form "Agricultural" for the discipline, and correct the prefecture name to "Ibaraki". "At" is acceptable before the faculty and university; no extra changes needed.'

× 'Especially I research on crops such as paprika.'

✓ 'I especially research crops such as paprika.'

'The verb "research" is transitive here and does not take the preposition "on" in this structure; move "especially" to modify the verb and place objects directly after the verb.'

× 'Yes, it's quite good price to study and research because my university has a huge greenhouse which is made of grass.'

✓ 'Yes, it's quite a good place to study and conduct research because my university has a huge greenhouse made of glass.'

'"Price" is incorrect; use "place". Add the indefinite article "a" before "good place." Use the verb phrase "conduct research" or "do research." "Which is made of grass" is likely wrong—use "made of glass." Remove unnecessary "which" for concise description.'

× 'It is good to produce crops.'

✓ 'It is good for producing crops.'

'Use "good for" + gerund to express purpose/benefit. "Good to produce crops" is awkward; "good for producing crops" is natural.'

× 'No, I wouldn't like the place. To make any changes because my laboratory is so quiet and this environment helps me concentrate to study.'

✓ 'No, I wouldn't like the place to be changed, because my laboratory is very quiet and this environment helps me concentrate on my studies.'

'Sentence fragments and word order issues: combine into one sentence. Use "wouldn't like the place to be changed" or "I wouldn't like any changes." Use "very" instead of "so" for tone, use "concentrate on" and "my studies" rather than "concentrate to study." '

× 'Currently I'm writing final report for graduating my bachelor program.'

✓ 'Currently I'm writing my final report to graduate from my bachelor's program.'

'Use possessive "my final report." Use the infinitive phrase "to graduate from" to indicate purpose, and use the correct form "bachelor's program." '

× 'In the future I'd like to go to master program at War Henningen University, which is that university and it's famous.'

✓ 'In the future I'd like to go to a master's program at War Henningen University, which is a well-known university.'

'Use "a master's program" with possessive and article, and rephrase the relative clause: use "which is a well-known university." Avoid "that university and it's famous," which is redundant and ungrammatical.'