Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and use correct time expressions. Use one or two supporting details if needed.

Ví dụ: I'm working now. I finished my studies three months ago, and since then I've been employed as an architectural assistant at a local firm.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and word order. Begin with a clear sentence: name the university and the course. Avoid repetition and be specific about the campus.

Ví dụ: I studied architecture at the Tehran branch of University of Tehran. I attended the city campus where the architecture faculty is based.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'because of' and correct noun forms (e.g., 'architects').

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because it's the oldest architecture school in the country and has a strong reputation. Many renowned architects graduated from there, which gives students valuable connections and inspiration.

Gợi ý: Structure your answer: state the change you want, then give two specific problems and a suggested improvement. Avoid repetition and filler words; use correct plural forms and clear verbs.

Ví dụ: Yes — I would like them to renovate the facilities. The classrooms are small and worn out, and the wall paint is peeling; they should repair and modernize the rooms and improve lighting and furniture.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear plan and specific details: where, what, and why. Use correct prepositions and mention a timeline or reason to make it more convincing.

Ví dụ: I plan to move abroad to continue my studies — specifically, I want to go to London to do a master's degree in architecture because UK programs are strong in design and offer good professional connections.

× Nowadays I'm uh, working, but for, uh, three months ago I was a student.

✓ Nowadays I'm working, but three months ago I was a student.

The phrase 'for three months ago' incorrectly combines 'for' with a specific past time. Use 'three months ago' to refer to a point in the past. Also remove filler commas and 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: say 'Nowadays I'm working, but three months ago I was a student.'

× I was a study in Tehran branch UH University Tehran S branch and it was for an architecture.

✓ I studied at the Tehran branch of the University of Tehran, and I was in the architecture program.

'I was a study' is ungrammatical; use the past tense verb 'studied'. Use preposition 'at' with institutions and 'branch of' to indicate location. 'It was for an architecture' is incorrect; say 'I was in the architecture program' or 'I studied architecture.' Suggestion: 'I studied at the Tehran branch of the University of Tehran, in the architecture program.'

× Yes, it was a good place to study especially it was the oldest university of architecture and it was very famous for their art architects.

✓ Yes, it was a good place to study; especially it was the oldest architecture university and was very famous for its architects and art programs.

Tense choice 'was' is acceptable if referring to past; the main problems are article and possessive usage. Use 'the oldest architecture university' or 'the oldest university for architecture.' 'Their' is incorrect for referring to the university; use 'its.' Also 'art architects' is awkward; 'architects and art programs' or simply 'architects' is clearer. Suggestion: 'Yes, it was a good place to study; it was the oldest university for architecture and was very famous for its architects.'

× Yes, of course it was really old and every classes was uh, very small and old and every painting of the walls was uh destroyed and they should uh, carry more than now uh, to this place and.

✓ Yes, of course it was really old. All the classes were very small and old, and the wall paintings were damaged. They should invest more in this place now.

Problems include article use and subject-verb agreement. Use 'all the classes' (not 'every classes') and plural verb 'were.' 'Every' must be followed by a singular noun (every class). 'Every painting of the walls' is awkward; 'the wall paintings' or 'the paintings on the walls' is better. 'Was destroyed' should be 'were damaged' for plural and to sound natural. 'Carry more than now to this place' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'invest more in this place now.' Suggestion: 'All the classes were very small and old, and the wall paintings were damaged. They should invest more in this place.'

× Of course, I want to immigrate to another country and continue my lessons at there. Especially I want to go to London and study architecture in masters.

✓ Of course, I want to immigrate to another country and continue my studies there. I especially want to go to London and study for a master's degree in architecture.

Use 'studies' instead of 'lessons' for higher education. Preposition 'at there' is incorrect; use 'there.' 'Study architecture in masters' is ungrammatical; say 'study for a master's degree in architecture' or 'study architecture at the master's level.' Suggestion: 'I want to continue my studies there and study for a master's degree in architecture in London.'