Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁，但句子结构稍显重复，建议简化表达并避免冗余。

Ví dụ: I am currently a student at Wenzhou Business College.

Gợi ý: 回答重复了上一题的信息，缺乏丰富细节。建议增加一些关于学校的描述，使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: I study at Wenzhou Business College, which is located in a vibrant city with many learning resources.

Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误，句子不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，并具体说明学校的优点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it's a great place to study because the school offers excellent services and has many modern facilities, making it an international environment.

Gợi ý: 表达含糊且语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达想法。

Ví dụ: Actually, I hope the school can add more photo studios because many students like taking pictures, but the current facilities are not very good.

Gợi ý: 回答不够具体且充满犹豫词，建议明确表达计划并减少口头语。

Ví dụ: My future study plans include passing my exams and completing my graduation thesis successfully.

× I'm a student and studying at Wenzhou Business College.

✓ I'm a student and I am studying at Wenzhou Business College.

句子中缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应在第二个分句前加上主语“I am”，使句子完整。

× Yes, I think it's a good place to study because my school is the excellent service to students and it's also very International School and have many pretty facilities like.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because my school provides excellent service to students and it's also a very international school and has many nice facilities.

形容词使用不当，如“the excellent service”应为“provides excellent service”；“very International School”应为“a very international school”；“pretty facilities”应为“nice facilities”。此外，动词与主语不一致，需改为“has”。

× Yes, I think it's a good place to study because my school is the excellent service to students and it's also very International School and have many pretty facilities like.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because my school provides excellent service to students and it's also a very international school and has many nice facilities.

主语与动词不一致，“my school”是单数，动词应使用单数形式“provides”和“has”。

× Uh, actually I want to my school, uh, add many Addison facility, uh, facilities la Labor, uh, because there are many students want to take photos, but the facilities is not really good.

✓ Uh, actually I want my school to add many additional facilities, because many students want to take photos, but the facilities are not really good.

“many Addison facility”应为“many additional facilities”，量词和名词单复数不匹配；“facilities is”应为“facilities are”，主谓一致。

× Uh, actually I want to my school, uh, add many Addison facility, uh, facilities la Labor, uh, because there are many students want to take photos, but the facilities is not really good.

✓ Uh, actually I want my school to add many additional facilities, because many students want to take photos, but the facilities are not really good.

“want to my school”中“to”使用错误，应去掉或改为“want my school to”。

× Uh, recently I want to pass my exam, uh, and uh, I should finish my uh, graduate paper, so just this.

✓ Uh, recently I want to pass my exam, and I should finish my graduate paper, so that's all.

“should finish my graduate paper”表达正确，但句尾“so just this”不自然，应改为“so that's all”更符合口语表达。