Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar information and try to link your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with the university name spelling and use contractions to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: I'm currently a criminology student at Kwantlen Polytechnic University, and I also work part-time as a housekeeper at a hotel in Vancouver.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides good details, but it can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, be careful with prepositions and article usage.

Ví dụ: I study at Kwantlen Polytechnic University, which is situated on the indigenous lands of the Kotlin people. It's in the centre of Surrey, so it's quite convenient to get there by public transport.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to study because the teachers are very professional and knowledgeable. The university library has a large collection of books on various subjects. Also, there is a cozy café and a peaceful environment to relax.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use complete sentences. Avoid fragments and improve sentence structure for better coherence.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think I would like to change anything. The campus is peaceful, and they provide many amenities that students need for their daily studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct some phrasing for clarity.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to study for a Bachelor's degree in Law. Currently, I'm pursuing a degree in criminology, but I hope to advance my career as a lawyer.

× I am a part time worker as a housekeeper in a hotel in Vancouver.

✓ I am a part-time worker as a housekeeper in a hotel in Vancouver.

The phrase 'part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective before a noun to correctly describe the type of worker.

× I study at Kwantlen Polytechnic University which is located on indigenous lands of Kotlin people.

✓ I study at Kwantlen Polytechnic University which is located on the indigenous lands of the Kotlin people.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'indigenous lands' and 'Kotlin people' to specify particular lands and people, improving clarity and correctness.

× It is located in center of Surrey and it is quite convenient to use public transport to reach there.

✓ It is located in the centre of Surrey and it is quite convenient to use public transport to get there.

The phrase 'in center of Surrey' requires the definite article 'the' before 'centre'. Also, 'reach there' is less natural than 'get there' in this context.

× University has a large amount of books in library related to different topics.

✓ The university has a large number of books in the library related to different topics.

'University' needs the definite article 'The' to specify it. 'A large amount of books' is incorrect because 'amount' is used with uncountable nouns; 'number' is correct for countable nouns like 'books'. Also, 'library' needs 'the' to specify it.

× Moreover, to relax there is a cozy cafe and are quite peaceful environment.

✓ Moreover, to relax there is a cozy cafe and a quite peaceful environment.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'quite peaceful environment' to correctly refer to a singular noun phrase.

× No, I don't think so. There is any specific thing that I would like to change in my school.

✓ No, I don't think so. There isn't any specific thing that I would like to change in my school.

The phrase 'There is any' is incorrect; the negative form 'There isn't any' is needed to express the absence of specific things to change.

× Everything is quite peaceful there. This. They have a lot of amenities and different things that a student need for their everyday studies they also provide.

✓ Everything is quite peaceful there. They have a lot of amenities and different things that a student needs for their everyday studies; they also provide these.

The sentence 'This.' is incomplete and should be removed. The verb 'need' should be 'needs' to agree with the singular subject 'a student'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split or connected properly with punctuation.

× In future I would like to study Bachelors of Law.

✓ In the future, I would like to study a Bachelor of Laws.

'In future' requires the definite article 'the'. The correct degree name is 'Bachelor of Laws' (singular 'Bachelor' and plural 'Laws').

× Currently I'm studying a lower level of degree in criminology, but I would really love to go further than this and forward my career as a lawyer.

✓ Currently, I'm studying a lower-level degree in criminology, but I would really love to go further than this and advance my career as a lawyer.

The phrase 'lower level of degree' is better expressed as 'lower-level degree' with a hyphen. Also, 'forward my career' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'advance' to express career progression.