Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 중복되는 표현이 많으며, 문장이 길고 어색합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 간결하고 자연스러운 문장으로 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: I am currently not working, but I am studying full-time. I quit my job to focus on my studies.

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 어색하고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하고, 구체적인 이유를 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: I usually study at a Study Cafe because it has a quiet atmosphere and good lighting, which helps me concentrate.

Gợi ý: 문장이 중복되고 어색한 부분이 많으며, 문법 오류도 있습니다. 명확하고 간결하게 이유를 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because the lighting is comfortable, everyone is focused, and they provide drinks to keep me refreshed.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 부자연스럽습니다. 명확한 의견 제시와 자연스러운 문장 연결을 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: I think the lighting is a bit too dim, and there are too many people inside. I would prefer a smaller, quieter space.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부자연스러운 부분이 있습니다. 명확한 계획을 간결하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: I am preparing for the American veterinary exam and also studying for the IELTS. I plan to improve my English daily and pursue a career in veterinary medicine in the USA.

× I mainly study at, uh, Study Cafe.

✓ I mainly study at, uh, Study Cafe.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× That is a perfect place to study in, uh, atmosphere wise and also the, uh, lightings are so good, so.

✓ That is a perfect place to study in terms of atmosphere, and also the lighting is very good.

The phrase 'atmosphere wise' is informal and awkward; 'in terms of atmosphere' is more appropriate. 'Lightings' is incorrect because 'lighting' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Yes, it definitely is. I I like the dark lighting of and the everyone is concentrating on their study and there are some beverages to not get thirsty and all of that comes to what I can concentrate.

✓ Yes, it definitely is. I like the dim lighting, and everyone is concentrating on their studies. There are some beverages to prevent thirst, and all of that helps me concentrate.

The phrase 'dark lighting of' is incomplete and awkward; 'dim lighting' is more appropriate. 'The everyone' is incorrect; 'everyone' does not need 'the'. 'Their study' should be plural 'their studies'. 'To not get thirsty' is awkward; 'to prevent thirst' is better. 'All of that comes to what I can concentrate' is unclear; 'helps me concentrate' is clearer.

× And one other things I, I just think I should change is there are too many people inside.

✓ And one other thing I just think I should change is that there are too many people inside.

'One other things' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun; it should be 'one other thing'. Also, adding 'that' after 'is' improves clarity.

× So I like, I would like to make it smaller.

✓ So I would like to make it smaller.

The phrase 'So I like, I would like' is redundant and awkward. Removing 'I like' improves sentence clarity and flow.

× Uh, as I am studying for a American veterinary exam, I should uh, study for this IELTS more and eventually I want to go to the America so I should study English everyday.

✓ Uh, as I am studying for an American veterinary exam, I should study for the IELTS more, and eventually I want to go to America, so I should study English every day.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an' ('an American'). 'This IELTS' is incorrect; 'the IELTS' is appropriate. 'The America' is incorrect; 'America' does not need an article. 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common'; 'every day' (two words) means 'each day' and is correct here.

× Also my veterinary uh, career should be studied.

✓ Also, I should study veterinary medicine for my career.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'My veterinary career should be studied' is incorrect. Rephrasing to 'I should study veterinary medicine for my career' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.