Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意单复数一致，时间表达应更准确，避免冗长句子。

Ví dụ: I am a senior high school student. My daily routine includes attending classes from 7:30 AM to 3:00 PM, and sometimes I have night classes from 6 to 9 PM.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不当，句子结构复杂且不够连贯。建议使用正确时态，简化句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I study at a private school in Taipei. The school is surrounded by beautiful scenery and magnificent mountains, which help me relax when I feel tired. I usually take a walk during breaks or before night classes.

Gợi ý: 表达较为清晰，但用词和句式稍显简单，且部分表达不够地道。建议丰富词汇，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study. Besides the beautiful scenery, our teachers are very caring. They pay attention to each student's well-being and offer practical advice not only about studies but also about life.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复，表达更简洁。

Ví dụ: I have studied at this school for 12 years, so changing to a new environment would be difficult. However, if necessary, it would be a good opportunity to adapt and make new friends.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议明确表达计划，使用正确的词汇和句式。

Ví dụ: I will take the university entrance exam next year. I also plan to apply to the University of Hong Kong and the Chinese University of Hong Kong because these opportunities are very important to me. I hope to achieve my best.

× I am a Senior High School students and usually my daily life is to go to school at 7730 and we all have a Class A day and also we all have night class from 6 to 9 and the home time will be 1030.

✓ I am a Senior High School student and usually my daily life is to go to school at 7:30 and we all have a Class A day and also we all have night class from 6 to 9 and the home time will be 10:30.

这里的主语是单数“I”，所以“students”应改为单数“student”。此外，时间表达应使用标准格式，如“7:30”和“10:30”。

× I studied at a private school in Taipei and my school have a beautiful scenery, magnificent mountain which make me relax when I were filled with fatigue and I usually go to go for a walk when I was take a break during the break time or the time before the night class.

✓ I studied at a private school in Taipei and my school has beautiful scenery, magnificent mountains which make me relax when I was filled with fatigue and I usually go for a walk when I take a break during the break time or the time before the night class.

“school”是单数，谓语动词应为“has”。“scenery”是不可数名词，不用加冠词“a”。“mountain”应为复数“mountains”，因为是复数形式。

× I studied at a private school in Taipei and my school have a beautiful scenery, magnificent mountain which make me relax when I were filled with fatigue and I usually go to go for a walk when I was take a break during the break time or the time before the night class.

✓ I studied at a private school in Taipei and my school has beautiful scenery, magnificent mountains which make me relax when I was filled with fatigue and I usually go for a walk when I take a break during the break time or the time before the night class.

“I were”应为“I was”，因为第一人称单数过去式用“was”。“I was take a break”应为“I take a break”，因为这里描述的是习惯动作，使用一般现在时。

× Of course, instead of the beautiful scenery, our school teacher is considerate to all students.

✓ Of course, besides the beautiful scenery, our school teachers are considerate to all students.

“teacher”应为复数“teachers”，因为后文指的是多位老师，谓语动词也应相应改为复数“are”。“instead of”用法不当，应改为“besides”表示“除了”。

× Of course, instead of the beautiful scenery, our school teacher is considerate to all students.

✓ Of course, besides the beautiful scenery, our school teachers are considerate towards all students.

“considerate to”应改为“considerate towards”，更符合英语习惯表达。

× They always mind that every student's condition at school and give them the most practical suggestions about not only learning but as well their lives.

✓ They always pay attention to every student's condition at school and give them the most practical suggestions not only about learning but also about their lives.

“mind”用法不当，应改为“pay attention to”。“not only... but as well”结构不正确，应改为“not only... but also”。

× Actually, I have already stayed in this school for 12 years, so it is quite difficult for me to change a whole new environment.

✓ Actually, I have already stayed in this school for 12 years, so it is quite difficult for me to change to a whole new environment.

“change a whole new environment”缺少介词，应为“change to a whole new environment”。

× But if it's necessary, it is be a good chance for me to adapt the new environment and make a good friend with others.

✓ But if it's necessary, it will be a good chance for me to adapt to the new environment and make good friends with others.

“it is be”语法错误，应为“it will be”。“adapt”后应加介词“to”。“make a good friend with others”应改为“make good friends with others”，符合习惯表达。

× I will have university entrance test next year, but I also want to apply for Hong Kong University and Hong Kong Chinese University, and these two changes are very valuable to me, so it hope that I can reach my peak.

✓ I will have the university entrance test next year, but I also want to apply to Hong Kong University and the Chinese University of Hong Kong, and these two choices are very valuable to me, so I hope that I can reach my peak.

“university entrance test”前应加定冠词“the”。“apply for”应改为“apply to”。“Hong Kong Chinese University”应为“The Chinese University of Hong Kong”。“changes”用词不当，应为“choices”。“it hope”语法错误，应为“I hope”。