Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm a student.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I study in university, which is in Bangkok, and I think Bangkok's traffic was very crowded. But I like Bangkok so much.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
I think it is a good place to study English because my university has many foreigner and we can communicate with each other by using English, so I think it's really useful.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like the place where I started to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment. For example, Andy Moore quite soothe and comfortable city area would help students study better.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
My future plans, naughty plans is I will try to study Thai language because nowadays I'm living in Thailand so that I think learn Thai language is important for me and my future cancer.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答简洁明了,但可以稍微丰富一点,增加一些细节,使回答更自然和有效。例如,可以说明你是哪个阶段的学生或学习什么专业。
Ví dụ: I'm a university student currently studying computer science.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中信息较多,但句子结构不够自然,时态使用不准确。建议使用更自然的表达,并注意时态一致性。
Ví dụ: I study at a university in Bangkok. Although the traffic here is often very crowded, I really enjoy living in this vibrant city.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“foreigner”应为“foreigners”,句子较长且重复。建议简化句子,使用正确的复数形式,并用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study English because my university has many foreigners, so we can practice speaking English together, which is very helpful.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,存在语法和词汇错误。建议明确表达想法,使用正确的词汇和句子结构,并举具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like my university to improve the study environment. For example, creating a quiet and comfortable area like Andy Moore Park would help students concentrate better.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和用词不当,如“naughty plans”和“future cancer”。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构,表达清晰具体。
Ví dụ: My future plan is to learn the Thai language because I am living in Thailand now, and I believe knowing Thai will be important for my future career.
× I think it is a good place to study English because my university has many foreigner and we can communicate with each other by using English, so I think it's really useful.
✓ I think it is a good place to study English because my university has many foreigners and we can communicate with each other by using English, so I think it's really useful.
The word 'foreigner' should be plural 'foreigners' because it refers to multiple people. In English, countable nouns need to be pluralized when referring to more than one.
× Yes, I would like the place where I started to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment.
✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment.
The phrase 'where I started' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'where I study' to refer to the current place. The original sentence structure causes confusion about the meaning.
× For example, Andy Moore quite soothe and comfortable city area would help students study better.
✓ For example, a quiet and comfortable city area like Andy Moore would help students study better.
The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Andy Moore' seems to be a place name, so it should be introduced properly. 'Quite soothe' is incorrect; it should be 'quiet and comfortable'. The sentence needs rephrasing for clarity.
× My future plans, naughty plans is I will try to study Thai language because nowadays I'm living in Thailand so that I think learn Thai language is important for me and my future cancer.
✓ My future plans, or rather, my naughty plans, are to try to study the Thai language because nowadays I'm living in Thailand, so I think learning Thai is important for me and my future career.
The sentence has multiple issues: 'naughty plans' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'not only plans' or 'main plans'; 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject; 'learn Thai language' should be 'learning Thai'; 'future cancer' is a mistake for 'future career'. The verb forms and word choices need correction to convey the intended meaning.