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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I do work. I'm working as a senior engineer in a construction company related to the road project. Umm have been working uh they are for a couple of year and the work is very demanding. I have to handle the side work and everything is under my control. It's quite stressful to to do.

Giám khảo

Where do you study?

Thí sinh

Well, I have studied in, uh, Himalaya in Coliseum Engineering, which is located in Seattle, Katman, Kathmandu. You know, it is a very high rise build, having a lot of qualified teacher who were very friendly and uh, simultaneous. It's challenging for us.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to study?

Thí sinh

Yeah, it is a very good place to study in regards or because of the qualified teacher who are so helpful. Even though even you have any talents about the your curriculum, they will be definitely helping you even in the night or the off time.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Thí sinh

Yeah, obviously I want to change up one thing about the colors. I do not like the space of the library. I find it very narrow, overcrowded. So I always want to expand the seat and the space so, so a lot of his number of people can be there studying at once.

Giám khảo

What are your future study plans?

Thí sinh

When I want to go to the euro for one of the best country, I haven't choose 18 but I want to purchase my master degree in in discipline related to civil engineering or I I guess it's precisely about the transportation that's I have been trying to.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Answer wa ni shizen de, shikashi, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunshou no tsukaikata ni yori, rikai ga muzukashiku natte imasu. Motto seikaku ni, shourai no jikan ya keiken ni tsuite no shousai o tsukeru to yoi desu. Mata, fukuzatsu na kotoba no tsukaikata o sakete, motto kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: I work as a senior engineer at a construction company that focuses on road projects. I have been working there for two years. My job is demanding because I manage several tasks and supervise the work. Although it is stressful, I enjoy the challenges it brings.

Where do you study?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa chokusetsu shite imasu ga, tokidoki fukuzatsu na kotoba ya imi ga fumei na kotoba ga arimasu. Tokuni, 'simultaneous' no you na kotoba wa kontekusuto ni awanai node, yoku rikai dekiru kotoba o erande kudasai. Mata, bun no tsuzuki o rikai shiyasuku suru tame ni, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: I studied at Himalaya College of Engineering in Kathmandu. The building is very tall, and the college has many qualified and friendly teachers. Studying there was challenging but rewarding.

Is it a good place to study?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to kotoba no tsukaikata ni shoujiki-sa ga tarimasen. 'Even though even you have any talents about the your curriculum' no you na fumei na hyougen wa kaizen ga hitsuyou desu. Motto meikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a very good place to study because the teachers are qualified and very helpful. They assist students with the curriculum even during nights or their free time.

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, 'change up one thing about the colors' no you na hyougen wa fumei de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto meikaku ni, shousai o tsukete setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte kotaete kudasai. Mata, bun no nagasa o 5 bun shika tsukawanai you ni ki o tsukete kudasai.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to change the library. It is too small and overcrowded. I want to expand the seating area so more people can study there comfortably.

What are your future study plans?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'I haven't choose 18' ya 'purchase my master degree' no you na fumei na hyougen wa kaizen ga hitsuyou desu. Motto seikaku ni, shourai no keikaku o setsumei shi, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: In the future, I want to study for a master's degree in civil engineering, focusing on transportation. I plan to go to a European country to pursue this degree.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Umm have been working uh they are for a couple of year and the work is very demanding.

I have been working there for a couple of years and the work is very demanding.

The sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'have been working', and 'they are' is incorrect; it should be 'there'. Also, 'year' should be plural 'years' because it refers to more than one year.

Singular and plural issue

× I have to handle the side work and everything is under my control.

I have to handle the side work, and everything is under my control.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no plural or singular issue detected here.

Singular and plural issue

× You know, it is a very high rise build, having a lot of qualified teacher who were very friendly and uh, simultaneous.

You know, it is a very high-rise building, having a lot of qualified teachers who are very friendly and, uh, supportive.

'Build' should be 'building' as a noun. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'a lot of'. 'Were' should be 'are' to maintain present tense. 'Simultaneous' is incorrect here; likely intended 'supportive' or similar.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yeah, it is a very good place to study in regards or because of the qualified teacher who are so helpful.

Yeah, it is a very good place to study because of the qualified teachers who are so helpful.

The phrase 'in regards or because of' is incorrect; 'because of' is appropriate. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'qualified' and context.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Even though even you have any talents about the your curriculum, they will be definitely helping you even in the night or the off time.

Even if you have any difficulties with your curriculum, they will definitely help you even at night or during off time.

'Talents about the your curriculum' is incorrect; likely meant 'difficulties with your curriculum'. 'They will be definitely helping you' is awkward; 'they will definitely help you' is better. 'In the night or the off time' should be 'at night or during off time'.

Singular and plural issue

× I do not like the space of the library. I find it very narrow, overcrowded.

I do not like the space of the library. I find it very narrow and overcrowded.

Adding 'and' improves sentence flow; no plural/singular issue here.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× So I always want to expand the seat and the space so, so a lot of his number of people can be there studying at once.

So I always want to expand the seating and the space so that a large number of people can study there at once.

'Seat' should be 'seating' to refer to capacity. 'A lot of his number of people' is incorrect; 'a large number of people' is correct. 'Can be there studying' is better as 'can study there'.

Future tense issue

× When I want to go to the euro for one of the best country, I haven't choose 18 but I want to purchase my master degree in in discipline related to civil engineering or I I guess it's precisely about the transportation that's I have been trying to.

I want to go to Europe, one of the best countries. I haven't chosen yet, but I want to pursue my master's degree in a discipline related to civil engineering, specifically transportation, which I have been trying to study.

'When I want to go' is awkward; simple present 'I want to go' is better. 'Euro' should be 'Europe'. 'I haven't choose 18' is incorrect; 'I haven't chosen yet' is correct. 'Purchase my master degree' should be 'pursue my master's degree'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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