Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复表达。建议简洁明了地表达身份和专业，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I am currently a law student at Julian University. I enjoy studying law because I want to become a lawyer in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子冗长且重复。建议使用连贯的句子，清晰表达地点和感受。

Ví dụ: I study at Jing University in Changchun City, Jilin Province. Although it is far from my hometown, I like the city and the friendly people who live there.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不清，缺乏具体细节。建议用具体理由和例子说明为什么是好地方，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because the city is beautiful and there are many opportunities to make friends and enjoy various activities.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊不清，语法错误多，表达不完整。建议明确指出想改变的具体方面，并用完整句子表达。

Ví dụ: I would like the university to improve its facilities because some of them are outdated and need renovation.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用错误，表达不流畅。建议清晰表达未来计划，并使用正确词汇。

Ví dụ: My goal is to become a lawyer in the future. Recently, I plan to read more books to improve my legal knowledge and skills.

× Now I'm a student in Julian University and my lawyer and my major is the law.

✓ Now I'm a student at Julian University and my major is law.

这里“lawyer”用错了，应该是“major”（专业），而且“law”前不需要冠词“the”。“in Julian University”应改为“at Julian University”，因为表示学校地点通常用“at”。

× Now I'm a student in Julian University and my lawyer and my major is the law.

✓ Now I'm a student at Julian University and my major is law.

表示在某个学校学习时，通常用介词“at”而不是“in”。

× All, I'm studying in Jing University, Changchun City in Jilin province and I really like there, although it is distant from my hometown but I like there and like land, like the people where they live there.

✓ I am studying at Jing University, Changchun City in Jilin province, and I really like it. Although it is far from my hometown, I like the place and the people who live there.

“like there”应改为“like it”，因为“there”不能直接作宾语。句子中“like land”不通顺，应改为“like the place”。“like the people where they live there”结构错误，应改为“like the people who live there”。

× All, I'm studying in Jing University, Changchun City in Jilin province and I really like there, although it is distant from my hometown but I like there and like land, like the people where they live there.

✓ I am studying at Jing University, Changchun City in Jilin province, and I really like it. Although it is far from my hometown, I like the place and the people who live there.

表示在学校学习时，介词应为“at”而非“in”。

× I really like there and like land, like the people where they live there.

✓ I really like it and like the land, and the people who live there.

“like there”应改为“like it”，因为“there”不能直接作宾语。

× Of course it's a good place to study. I think everyone will like their if you come there to travel or study and and so on.

✓ Of course it's a good place to study. I think everyone will like it if you come there to travel or study, and so on.

“like their”应为“like it”，因为指代地点用“it”。

× There is beautiful city and you can get some funny things and make good friends and do anything.

✓ It is a beautiful city, and you can experience many fun things, make good friends, and do anything you want.

“There is beautiful city”缺少冠词，应为“It is a beautiful city”。“get some funny things”表达不自然，应改为“experience many fun things”。

× So anything So what what you want to do. So it's a good place to study.

✓ So you can do anything you want. It's a good place to study.

原句结构混乱，需调整为完整句子。

× I really like there and like land, like the people where they live there.

✓ I really like it and like the land, and the people who live there.

“where they live there”重复且结构错误，应改为“who live there”。

× I really like there and like land, like the people where they live there.

✓ I really like it and like the land, and the people who live there.

“like land”应为“like the land”，加上定冠词。

× Umm, let me think, uh, to be honest, uh, I wanted to change something, uh, about my study, Please. Uh, some some something is the facilities is less is less than or need.

✓ Umm, let me think. To be honest, I want to change something about my studies. The facilities are insufficient or need improvement.

句子结构混乱，时态应为现在时表达愿望，“facilities”是复数，谓语应用“are”，表达更清晰。

× some some something is the facilities is less is less than or need.

✓ The facilities are insufficient or need improvement.

“facilities”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”，且表达应简洁明确。

× My meter is low in the college so so my study plans is to be a lawyer in the future and in the recently I want to read more several books to improve my low skills.

✓ My grades are low in college, so my study plan is to become a lawyer in the future. Recently, I want to read several books to improve my law skills.

“meter”应为“grades”，“study plans”应为单数“study plan”，“in the recently”应为“recently”，“low skills”应为“law skills”。

× My meter is low in the college so so my study plans is to be a lawyer in the future and in the recently I want to read more several books to improve my low skills.

✓ My grades are low in college, so my study plan is to become a lawyer in the future. Recently, I want to read several books to improve my law skills.

“grades”应为复数，“study plan”应为单数，保持主谓一致。

× My meter is low in the college so so my study plans is to be a lawyer in the future and in the recently I want to read more several books to improve my low skills.

✓ My grades are low in college, so my study plan is to become a lawyer in the future. Recently, I want to read several books to improve my law skills.

表达现在的状态和计划，时态应为一般现在时。