Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm still a student in IS China University of Technology and Science”中的“IS”应为“at”，且句子结构不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

Ví dụ: I'm currently a student at East China University of Technology and Science, majoring in Financial Management. I really enjoy my major because it offers practical knowledge.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且内容丰富，但存在语法错误，如“I am study”应为“I study”。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I study at East China University of Technology and Science, specializing in Financial Management. I enjoy it because it teaches me how businesses handle their finances, which is practical for my future career. Moreover, the subject is both challenging and interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“we can access”用词不当，且“Sadly”用词不符合语境。建议使用更准确的词汇，并避免语气词影响流畅度。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it's a good place to study. There are many well-known professors, and we can easily ask them questions during their office hours. Also, there are large classrooms available for studying when no classes are scheduled.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“there are still need to be improved”应为“there is still room for improvement”，且最后一句不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: I think the place where I study is quite good, but there is still room for improvement. For example, the air conditioning could be stronger, especially during the hot summer. Also, having some stores nearby would be convenient for buying daily necessities.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“After graduated”应为“After graduating”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的时态和避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: After graduating from university, I plan to find a suitable job. However, if I cannot find one, I would like to continue my studies in the UK, preferably in London.

× I am study in East China University of Technology and Science where I specialize in financial management.

✓ I am studying at East China University of Technology and Science where I specialize in financial management.

这里应该使用现在进行时态，表示正在进行的动作。'am study' 是错误的，正确形式是 'am studying'。另外，介词应为 'at' 表示在某个学校。

× I am study in East China University of Technology and Science where I specialize in financial management.

✓ I am studying at East China University of Technology and Science where I specialize in financial management.

表示在某个学校时，应该用介词 'at' 而不是 'in'。

× there are a lot of famous professors in our study.

✓ there are a lot of famous professors in our study department.

'our study' 这里缺少名词，应该补充 'department' 表示我们的学习部门或系。

× Whenever we have a question we can access, we can ask them in their office.

✓ Whenever we have a question, we can ask them in their office.

句子中 'we can access' 不合适，且结构混乱，应去掉 'we can access'，使句子通顺。

× Sadly, there are a lot of big classrooms and whenever there are no classes, we can study there.

✓ Luckily, there are a lot of big classrooms and whenever there are no classes, we can study there.

'Sadly' 表达的情感与句意不符，应该用 'Luckily' 表示幸运，有很多大教室可用。

× I think the place where I study it is perfect, but there are still need to be improved.

✓ I think the place where I study is perfect, but there still needs to be improvement.

句中 'where I study it is perfect' 中 'it' 多余，应去掉。'there are still need to be improved' 结构错误，改为 'there still needs to be improvement'。

× Secondly, we need some stores nearby so we can buy some.

✓ Secondly, we need some stores nearby so we can buy some things.

句尾 'buy some' 不完整，应该补充宾语，如 'some things'。

× After graduated from the university, I would like to find some proper jobs.

✓ After graduating from the university, I would like to find some proper jobs.

'After graduated' 应用动名词形式 'graduating'，表示动作完成后。

× I would like to find some proper jobs.

✓ I would like to find a proper job.

'jobs' 复数与 'some' 搭配虽可，但语境中更自然用单数 'a proper job' 表示一份合适的工作。