Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和冗余。比如“going knowledge”表达不准确，应改为“gaining knowledge”。建议简洁明了地表达学习专业和原因。

Ví dụ: I am currently studying bioengineering at Hillingdon University. The campus is beautiful, and studying here helps me gain the knowledge and skills I need for my future career.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，影响理解。应直接回答学校和地点，描述时用正确的句子结构和词汇。避免重复和不连贯的表达。

Ví dụ: I study at Heilongjiang University, which is located in Heilongjiang province. The city is very beautiful, especially in winter when it is covered with snow.

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误和重复。可以说明为什么学生多使学习氛围好，表达对学校的具体评价。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because there are many smart students, which motivates me to learn more about my major.

Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰，避免犹豫和语法错误。可以具体说明希望改善的设施及原因，使表达更完整。

Ví dụ: I would like the university to install air conditioners because the winters are very cold and the summers are quite hot, which makes studying uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用不当，语法错误较多。应明确表达未来计划和学习目标，使用正确词汇如“postgraduate examination”和“biology”。

Ví dụ: I am preparing for my postgraduate examination because I want to deepen my knowledge of biology beyond the basics.

× Studying allows me to focus on going knowledge and skills that help me in future career.

✓ Studying allows me to focus on gaining knowledge and skills that help me in my future career.

这里 'going knowledge' 是错误的表达，正确的动词形式应该是 'gaining'，表示“获得知识”。应使用动词的 -ing 形式来表达正在进行的动作。

× I'm studying Heilongjiang University, he located in Heilongjiang province.

✓ I'm studying at Heilongjiang University, which is located in Heilongjiang province.

句中 'he' 用作指代大学是不正确的，应该用关系代词 'which' 来引导定语从句，且动词前应加介词 'at' 表示在某地学习。

× Her being city this is very beautiful eye cities because every winter this will be get a low snow and so beautiful.

✓ Her city is very beautiful because every winter it gets a light snow and looks very beautiful.

句中 'Her being city' 结构不正确，应改为 'Her city is'；'eye cities' 无意义，应删除；'this will be get a low snow' 语法错误，改为 'it gets a light snow'。代词使用不当，需改正。

× There are very so much smarter students, so I want to learn about my major and actually this is a very good place to study.

✓ There are so many smart students, so I want to learn about my major. Actually, this is a very good place to study.

'very so much' 是错误的量词搭配，应改为 'so many' 来修饰可数名词 'students'；'smarter' 比较级不合适，改为形容词原级 'smart'。

× Actually, yes, because.

✓ Actually, yes, because it has good facilities and a good environment.

句子不完整，'because' 后面应有原因或解释，需补充完整句子。

× I expect that. How, uh, air conditioner because the winter is so cold and the summer is very hot.

✓ I expect that there will be air conditioners because the winter is so cold and the summer is very hot.

句中 'How, uh, air conditioner' 结构混乱，缺少谓语，应补充 'there will be' 来表达期望有空调。

× And this is my, uh, disadvantages for my university.

✓ And this is my disadvantage at my university.

'disadvantages' 应为单数 'disadvantage'，且介词应为 'at' 表示在某处的缺点。

× Actually I am preparing my postgres examination because I want to learn more about the biologist and I think I learn so basic so I want to in depth of the biologist.

✓ Actually, I am preparing for my postgraduate examination because I want to learn more about biology. I think my knowledge is basic, so I want to study biology in depth.

'preparing my postgres examination' 应为 'preparing for my postgraduate examination'；'the biologist' 用词错误，应为 'biology'；'I want to in depth of the biologist' 结构错误，应改为 'I want to study biology in depth'。