Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm a currently student at the school high school where I am focusing on science subjects because I'm very interested in English. I enjoy learning new things and I hope to pursue a career in medicine in the future.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
Well I am 30 at the high school and I am 10th grade and I'm interested in English and history.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes of course umm my school is very good places during I study my home tasks.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like the place I where I started to make some changes I would want to my. Over time table will be changes in the future because it is.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm going to be a teacher in my future plans and because I want to be Twitch students and maybe I will teacher, I will be.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va so'z tartibini yaxshilash kerak. Masalan, 'I'm a currently student' o'rniga 'I'm currently a student' deb aytish tabiiyroq bo'ladi. Shuningdek, javobni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, mavzuga to'g'ridan-to'g'ri javob berish muhim.
Ví dụ: I am currently a high school student focusing on science subjects because I am very interested in medicine. I enjoy learning new things and hope to pursue a career in this field in the future.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Javobda aniq va to'g'ri ma'lumot berish kerak. 'I am 30 at the high school' degan jumla noaniq va noto'g'ri. Shuningdek, gapni qisqaroq va to'g'ri tuzish muhim.
Ví dụ: I study at a high school and I am in the 10th grade. I am interested in English and history subjects.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Javobda grammatik xatolar va noaniqliklar mavjud. 'My school is very good places' noto'g'ri ifoda. Javobni aniq va to'g'ri gaplar bilan ifodalash kerak.
Ví dụ: Yes, of course. My school is a good place to study, and I can complete my homework there comfortably.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Javob juda noaniq va grammatik jihatdan noto'g'ri. Gaplarni aniq va mantiqiy tarzda ifodalash, o'z fikringizni to'liq yetkazish muhim.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the school to change the timetable in the future because the current one is not very convenient for students.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Javobda grammatik xatolar va mantiqiy chalkashliklar bor. O'z rejalaringizni aniq va to'g'ri gaplar bilan ifodalash kerak.
Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to become a teacher because I want to help students learn and succeed.
× Well, I'm a currently student at the school high school where I am focusing on science subjects because I'm very interested in English.
✓ Well, I'm currently a student at the high school where I am focusing on science subjects because I'm very interested in English.
The adjective 'currently' should come before the noun 'student' without the article 'a' separating them. Also, 'the school high school' is incorrect; it should be 'the high school'. The correct order is 'currently a student' and 'the high school'.
× Well I am 30 at the high school and I am 10th grade and I'm interested in English and history.
✓ Well, I am 30 years old and I am in 10th grade at the high school, and I'm interested in English and history.
The sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. 'I am 30 at the high school' is confusing; it should specify '30 years old'. Also, 'I am 10th grade' should be 'I am in 10th grade'. Proper conjunctions and commas improve readability.
× Yes of course umm my school is very good places during I study my home tasks.
✓ Yes, of course, umm my school is a very good place where I study and do my homework.
'School' is singular, so 'places' should be 'place'. Also, 'during I study my home tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'where I study and do my homework'. 'Homework' is uncountable and more appropriate than 'home tasks'.
× Yes, I would like the place I where I started to make some changes I would want to my. Over time table will be changes in the future because it is.
✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some changes. I would want my timetable to be changed over time in the future because it is necessary.
The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'I where I started' is incorrect; it should be 'where I study'. 'I would want to my' is incomplete. 'Over time table will be changes' should be 'my timetable to be changed over time'. The sentence needs to be split for clarity.
× Well, I'm going to be a teacher in my future plans and because I want to be Twitch students and maybe I will teacher, I will be.
✓ Well, my future plan is to be a teacher because I want to teach students, and maybe I will be a teacher.
The sentence has tense and word choice errors. 'Going to be a teacher in my future plans' is awkward; better to say 'my future plan is to be a teacher'. 'Twitch students' is incorrect; it should be 'teach students'. 'Maybe I will teacher' is missing the verb 'be' and article 'a'.