Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct prepositions and capitalize proper nouns. Also, provide a bit more detail to make your answer more natural and informative.

Ví dụ: I'm currently working at Tim Hortons, a popular coffee shop. I have finished my studies and am focusing on my job now.

Gợi ý: Use correct prepositions and verb tenses, and avoid redundancy. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly for better coherence.

Ví dụ: I attended a local school from grade one to grade twelve. After that, I decided to pursue higher education abroad, so I came to Canada and enrolled at Saint Lawrence College in Kingston, Ontario.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, be more specific about what makes the place good for studying.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because the professors are very helpful and always willing to answer our questions. Moreover, the peaceful environment allows students to concentrate better on their studies.

Gợi ý: Directly answer the question about changes first, then provide reasons or recommendations. Avoid repeating previous points without addressing the question.

Ví dụ: I don't think any major changes are needed because the college is peaceful and supportive. In fact, I often recommend it to other students looking for a good study environment.

Gợi ý: Try to use more precise vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify the name of the program you plan to join for better understanding.

Ví dụ: I want to become a police officer. I recently graduated from the Community and Justice Services program, and in the future, I plan to enroll in a Police Foundations program, which will help me achieve my career goal.

× I'm working on Tim horton's.

✓ I work at Tim Hortons.

The present continuous tense 'I'm working' is not appropriate here because the question asks about a habitual action or current job. The simple present 'I work' is correct. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'at' is used for workplaces. 'Tim Hortons' is a proper noun and should be capitalized without an apostrophe.

× So then I came Canada.

✓ So then I came to Canada.

The verb 'came' is past tense and correct, but the preposition 'to' is missing before 'Canada'. The phrase should be 'came to Canada' to indicate movement towards a place.

× Then I took admission in Saint Lawrence College in Kingston, ON.

✓ Then I took admission at Saint Lawrence College in Kingston, ON.

The correct preposition with 'take admission' is 'at' rather than 'in'. 'Admission at' is the standard collocation when referring to enrolling in an institution.

× Yes, it is a better place to study because all the professor professors are very nice, they can answer whenever we ask for.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because all the professors are very nice; they answer whenever we ask.

'Better' is a comparative adjective and requires a comparison object, which is missing here. 'Good' is appropriate. The word 'professor' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'they can answer whenever we ask for' is awkward; 'they answer whenever we ask' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Also, I really love the environment of the world.

✓ Also, I really love the environment here.

'Environment of the world' is awkward and unclear. Since the student is referring to the local environment, 'environment here' is more natural and appropriate.

× So can we can easily concentrate on our studies?

✓ So we can easily concentrate on our studies.

The sentence has redundant modal verbs 'can we can'. Removing 'can' after 'we' corrects the sentence structure.