Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm currently a math student at Central China Normal University majoring modern Educational technology.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I study at Central China Normal University.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is an excellent place to study because academic atmosphere is very motivating and warm. The teachers and students are always help me whenever I have a question.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
I I actually I hope there can be more seats and uh, varieties books in the library. Because the library is over overcrowded that I always cannot find a good place to study.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
Oh well, I hope to actually help pass this exercise and uh, if I could, I wanted to study abroad.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性,例如“majoring in modern Educational Technology”,并且句子结构应更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm currently a mathematics student at Central China Normal University, majoring in Modern Educational Technology.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍作扩展以显得更自然,例如加上地点或学校的特点。
Ví dụ: I study at Central China Normal University, which is located in Wuhan, China.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 注意语法错误,如“academic atmosphere is”应为“the academic atmosphere is”,“are always help me”应为“always help me”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, it is an excellent place to study because the academic atmosphere is very motivating and warm, and the teachers and students always help me whenever I have a question.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“varieties books”应为“variety of books”,“over overcrowded”应为“overcrowded”。建议简化表达并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Actually, I hope there could be more seats and a greater variety of books in the library because it is often overcrowded, and I can't always find a good place to study.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达有误,如“help pass this exercise”不明确,时态混乱。建议明确表达未来计划并使用正确时态。
Ví dụ: Well, I hope to pass this exam successfully, and if possible, I would like to study abroad in the future.
× I'm currently a math student at Central China Normal University majoring modern Educational technology.
✓ I'm currently a math student at Central China Normal University majoring in modern Educational Technology.
动词 'major' 后面应接介词 'in' 来引出专业名称,表示“主修……”。缺少介词导致表达不完整。建议记住 'major in' 是固定搭配。
× Yes, it is an excellent place to study because academic atmosphere is very motivating and warm.
✓ Yes, it is an excellent place to study because the academic atmosphere is very motivating and warm.
名词短语 'academic atmosphere' 前缺少定冠词 'the',因为这里特指学校的学术氛围。定冠词用于特指已知或特定的事物。
× The teachers and students are always help me whenever I have a question.
✓ The teachers and students always help me whenever I have a question.
句中 'are always help' 结构错误,'help' 是动词,不能和 'are' 连用。应直接用 'always help'。此外,'help me' 中代词使用正确,无需改动。
× I I actually I hope there can be more seats and uh, varieties books in the library.
✓ I actually hope there can be more seats and various books in the library.
句子中重复使用 'I',且 'varieties books' 结构错误,应使用形容词 'various' 修饰复数名词 'books'。重复词语和词性错误导致句子结构混乱。
× Because the library is over overcrowded that I always cannot find a good place to study.
✓ Because the library is overcrowded, I always cannot find a good place to study.
'over overcrowded' 是重复使用前缀 'over',应去掉一个。'that' 在此句中用法不当,应改为逗号连接两个分句。
× Oh well, I hope to actually help pass this exercise and uh, if I could, I wanted to study abroad.
✓ Oh well, I hope to actually pass this exam and, if I can, I want to study abroad.
'help pass this exercise' 用法不当,应为 'pass this exam'。'if I could' 和 'I wanted' 时态不一致,表达愿望应使用一般现在时 'if I can' 和 'I want'。此外,'exercise' 一般指练习,不适合此处语境。